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Hello, I love how you so nochalantly say , "In the end he was shot dead." I don't know if that was how I was supposed to read it or ...

Hello there, This is really sad, yet very well written! Your word choice is optimal and the way you place "love" and "hardened heart" "burden of stone" was great. I ...

Okay, here we go! To begin with I liked the overall way you emphasized this topic. It made it feel more real than just explaining a situation. You added feeling ...

Yastika02, I saw that you wanted me to read and possibly review your story so here I am! I haven't read "Look into my eyes" on here but now because ...

Nightowl, First off I thought it was funny and clever that your username has owl in it and here you are writing about feathers and birds. I liked how it ...

aouther2b, Okay I felt like this could really be associated with anyone really. I know that I could equate with this for I lie a lot to people because I ...

Delirium, Short yet very well done. Even though it doesn't really rhyme in the normal way it still sounds as though it rhymes for some reason. I'm not sure if ...

Collideascope, Okay here we go. I'm not a religious person but this sounds as though this was written to be associated with biblical topics. Such as, "Glue on your crown ...

TheShauzer I reaaly like this poem. In fact I had a story idea with this kind of theme. It's sort of a fantasy love story about a girl and a ...

Skydreamer I think this is a unique poem choice. It seems like this would have been a perfect poem to post near veterans day. For all of them guys and ...

FerrumCorde I actually really like this. It has been used many, many times and that is just fine. I've liked every one I've read so far including yours. When it ...

Taylorb1997 This is an interesting poem you did. I like the format; I'm not sure what about the center format makes me like it. I guess it might just make ...

kingofeli Well then, this was depressing. You did a very nice job capturing the feelings of the dog and a possible way that they think. If that is truly how ...

Bookwolf, I dug through every comment to see if I was right lol. I thought this was a fun way to write a poem, I haven't seen anyone use one ...

Firepower13 Wow! Here we go. I actually really like this. The rhyming and wording flows really well throughout mall of it. I do though have one part that kinda stuck ...