I really liled this poem a lot. Its really true and gives you facts of life as they are. You have a few rhyming words and it really adds a lot to the poem.I love the part where you have written things like- But the choice is mine, right?
To make that cut.
Or not.
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The choice is mine.
To take that drink.
Or not.
.
The choice is mine.
To take that pill.
Or not.
.
The choice is mine.
To die.
Or not.
I like this line a lot because no matter what happens we will always have a choice and can change are life in one single choice.
My most favourite lines are these- I call, and guess who answers?
Hope.
And it's a damn good thing
Thase 3 line are so very true because in even the worse cases there will always be hope.and it is of course a good thing.
In all i really liked this poem.good job.I hope to see more of your work in the future.
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