dystopianmonkey01

I must say, the layout is amazing. I love it! If I were an english guru, I would hang this on my wall! No Lies! The top of the page ...

Hey! Tiana here for a review. Just a quick disclaimer - by no means am I a poetry expert, but I read a lot and write a lot of poetry ...

This is good. I like most of the stanzas here as individually they are fantastic but together it's a bit of a mess, but a beautiful mess!! I agree yet ...

Hey, Tiana here reviewing. There's not much to critique here because you've written this really well and I really enjoy the formatting, I particularly like the aesthetics of the poem, ...

Hi, Tiana reviewing your poem. Now I liked how motivational it is but I think in the essence of a poem, it sounds a bit too happy. You've gotta be ...

Wow, I love how this is factual yet is so imaginative, it was really captivating and interesting to read. This reminds me of something they'd encourage high school students to ...

It makes you think. There's the emotional link to the poem and we can all tell that it comes straight from the purest parts of your heart. Poetry like this ...

Hi, Tiana here for a review. Ok, so when I first looked at this poem I skimmed over it and thought "eh okay, a poem about hating Monday's..." But then ...

This has rhythm. This flows amazingly. The imagery is wow. I love the repetition of "I will be home", it really gives the poem a beautiful feeling to it. Even ...

Hey, this was quite a good poem. As stated previously, it was a bit wordy. For me, the lines were a tad too long for my liking and to be ...

This was really nice to read. I liked the metaphor in the 2nd stanza, you did it really well. I'm assuming this is a ballad, you've told us what's happened, ...

Hey. I like the simplicity of this. The first line is great, its factual but it kinda emphasises the diversity of a bus ride, which is really captivating and thought ...

I commend your rhyme scheme. Very nice. However some words almost rhyme but don't completely, but I think they should rhyme completely and are otherwise an unsuitable word. I enjoy ...

This was really nice to read. It brought lots of questions to a table and an overall different outlook on life. You have a great writing style that just flows ...

Hey, Tiana here. The first stanza really hit rock bottom for me. You've played on a very common matter for teenage girls, and we can all relate to this personal ...