I suppose I could've done this in Word but I had this as a painting assignment so oh well.
I don’t think it’s bad. In my opinion, paint is a hard art medium. I better with pencils and ink. Blots are completely normal and happen to everybody. Yes,even DaVinci got blots. That my theory on why he looks pissed in a portrait. The piece is simple and beautiful. Perhaps, you can use blots to create effects. That’s what most people including myself do. I know this is unrelated, but you have pretty handwriting.
That is a masterpiece I just love the way you arranged the words. and the colour pattern is fabulous. Its a true work of art that deserves to be in a museum. Your a true Picasso. Keep using your heart to make relatable peices like this! -demoncatBy the way ur my first review yay!
HEELLO Codayy, Art or poetry? I vote for both. Very nice combination. You painted this? As in wrote it with a paintbrush? Whenever I try to write something with a paintbrush, it turns out pretty bad. So I congratulate you! I like how you wrote a poem but put it under the art category. Poetry is a form of literary art, so it counts! This also sounds like Language Arts class. Get it? Language "Arts"? that's why you put it under art? "Short sentences format inexcusably" and "add some adverbs to sound relatable" sounds like something my english teacher would say. This poem is like a note-to-self! It took me a while to read the last part correctly. I thought it said "YCDI OAOT UN" at first, since I was reading left to right. But than I realized it was "you can do it" going up and down and it made a lot more sense. Again I congratulate you!Big Beliefs,Night Kaizer
This is Nikayla here for a review!So I wanted to review this to prove that I could review art :p. But really, I thought this was an interesting piece and wanted to give my opinion on it. I think this actually looks cooler than it would in Word because it adds your own personal touch to it and the handwriting that you use is interesting to me. We see how this starts off by stating something that's a larger part of the poem, saying that manifestos are a boring way to express ideas. I found this to be an interesting first line and something else that I noticed is that this is purely words and nothing else, which is something that has always fascinated me when it comes to art. If you wanted to make pictures out of words eventually I think that would be something cool, because I already liked this piece. An interesting paint assignment to have and to end up choosing something with pure words. I especially liked the vocabulary that you used as well as the lines that happened to fit with what you were painting here because it makes the picture even more vivid. The ending felt a little abrupt to me, but I don't think this is a bad thing as it adds a different sense or tone that contrasts from the rest of the piece. The different fonts and styles that you have here are another thing that I love about the piece, and I'd love to see more art-related things from you and perhaps you could start up a thread with them? I would definitely follow it if you did, but you don't have to. The piece tells a bit of a story and a message that goes along with it, though I would have liked to see that honed in instead of it being as broad as it is? But overall, it's an interesting piece that does well.I hope I helped and have a great day!
I must say, the layout is amazing. I love it! If I were an english guru, I would hang this on my wall! No Lies! The top of the page is a bit squished, I won't lie, but I like how the words "overshadow my little evidence" are centred. My favourite part would definitely have to be the black highlighted bit, like yeah man! Looks great! Only suggestion is towards the bottom everything is centred and a tad squished, so spread it out a bit more next time and don't feel like it has to be centred all the time! This is really lovely - Tiana
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