dogsrule5

Hey, Dogs here for a review! I really like this poem. It's very well-written and simple. I like how you repeat "A ray of hope" which brings lines in the ...

Hey, Dogs here to review. So, let's get started shall we? Errors: I saw a tiny error, when you say. Head home at 8:00 and pick up Chinese. The lady ...

Hey, Dogs here for a review, on your awesome poem. I really liked it, but enough about that let's get started! :3 Figurative Language: You used a lot for similes ...

Hey there Harry. Dogs here for a review. Let's start with some simple nitpicks shall we? Don't take these things personally, I'm only trying to help, not trying to be ...

Hey, Dogs here for a review on another one of your poems. I just can't get over the fact that you are such good at rhyming. I wish I had ...

Hey! Dogs here to review! Frist off AMEN! I really love this poem. I'm a Christian as well, and I very much believe in all of this. Let's start with ...

Hey. Great poem. I don't normally talk about this, unless I feel like it's important. For you it's important. Theme/Message: (What I don't normally talk about in my reviews) Anyway, ...

Hey, I thought this was a really good idea for a short story. I really liked it. Your grammar was really good, as well as spelling, and punctuation. I didn't ...

Hey, Dogs here for a review. First off, I'm sorry about your loss. It must've been really sad. Now, let's get to the review shall we. Nitpicks/mistakes *Please don't take ...

Hola me amigo, (Hello my friend) Dogs here to review. So I really liked your poem, and I thought it was very sweet. So, I didn't really find many nitpicks, ...

Hey, Dogs here for a review. So first, I really loved your poem, it showed that eventually our world will end, but we don't know when. I loved the meaning, ...

Hey, Dogs here. I see you're new to YWS, welcome to our friendly community. I'm Dogsrule5, but feel free to call me Dogs. Anyway let's start with the review shall ...

Hey, Dogs here for a quick review. I really like your other thing, weather it's a poem, or story, or just an other thing. Anyway the point is I really ...

First off welcome to YWS. I'm Dogsrule5, but feel free to call me Dogs. Secondly nice poem. I really like the imagery you used. Here are some tips and ideas ...

I thought this poem was cute. Very simple idea, and I really liked it. Sometimes a very simple idea can be turned into something wonderful. This was a very almost ...