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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter 2 : My You

    It’s been awhile since I’ve read the first chapter (sorry about that) but now I’ve come to read the second chapter! I like how excited the siren is. It’s the ...

    Oct 3, 2023
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: Seven-Legged Spider Friend

    Very cute and perfect for Halloween! I adore how the spider still made webs despite having seven legs. Nature really does inspire. Even the littlest animal can make an impact. ...

    Oct 2, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 18

    I feel bad for Rei. She cares about all of them and only wants the best for the group. I don’t blame her for not trusting Keith. Keith and Rei ...

    Oct 1, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 17

    The part with Keith tip-toeing had me laughing! I could imagine it perfectly in my head. The spaceship seems really homey for a spaceship. I like that! :> Sooner or ...

    Sep 30, 2023
  • Short Story » Romantic, Science Fiction Re: ​Colored in Light

    Beautiful and tragic. Marisol gave up Earth to set Julia free. True love at its finest. Is it possible that dying in space sounds more macabre than dying on Earth, ...

    Sep 29, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: The Unnamed Poem

    I see this poem as someone with a big heart who loves all people dearly. The person cries because they feel intense amounts of frustration and sadness, but also because ...

    Sep 28, 2023
  • Script » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The End of the World

    This is my first time reading a script and I have to say, I like it. Why would Landon do such a thing as kill his parents? There must have ...

    Sep 27, 2023
  • Short Story » General, Other Re: The Darkness

    That ending was so sweet…I loved it. It seems like there is only Hell that awaits, until that one person shows up to help you out. It is hard for ...

    Sep 26, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dance With the Devil

    I love this poem! It shows that The Devil is beautiful to entice others, to trick them. Kind of like how people deemed ”beautiful” by the majority of the world ...

    Sep 25, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Sincerely, Yours- Chapter One: Through the Business Lane

    William is going to Germany? Exciting! I wonder who this person that will bring romance to William’s life will be. He’s lucky that he got the job, now he has ...

    Sep 24, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Horror Re: Round and Round Chapter 2

    I have a feeling that Sylvia’s second attempt at killing herself and Jake isn’t going to work. Something is keeping them trapped in a loop. Or maybe it’s someone… I ...

    Sep 23, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Round and Round Chapter 1

    I did not expect that ending. I wonder now if that really happened. Maybe it was just a dream…or when Jake “wakes up”, he actually goes into the afterlife. What ...

    Sep 22, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Highway of Darkness

    It’s horrible to think that there are people like the men driving the kids away in real life. One wonders what goes on in the children’s minds…and in this story, ...

    Sep 21, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Task of Silence

    I love the imagery. It’s very descriptive and fun. It gets you in the mood of the poem. The poem itself is cryptic enough to be a riddle, but clear ...

    Sep 20, 2023
  • Short Story » Health, Narrative Re: Why Try Walking … When You Can Dance

    I liked this story. Despite it all, Lisanne preserved. She has a really big heart, because I wouldn’t have kept quiet about what Katherine did. Lisanne’s Mom is the best! ...

    Sep 19, 2023


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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