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Re: Chapter 2 : My You
It’s been awhile since I’ve read the first chapter (sorry about that) but now I’ve come to read the second chapter! I like how excited the siren is. It’s the ...
Oct 3, 2023 -
Re: Seven-Legged Spider Friend
Very cute and perfect for Halloween! I adore how the spider still made webs despite having seven legs. Nature really does inspire. Even the littlest animal can make an impact. ...
Oct 2, 2023 -
Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 18
I feel bad for Rei. She cares about all of them and only wants the best for the group. I don’t blame her for not trusting Keith. Keith and Rei ...
Oct 1, 2023 -
Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 17
The part with Keith tip-toeing had me laughing! I could imagine it perfectly in my head. The spaceship seems really homey for a spaceship. I like that! :> Sooner or ...
Sep 30, 2023 -
Re: Colored in Light
Beautiful and tragic. Marisol gave up Earth to set Julia free. True love at its finest. Is it possible that dying in space sounds more macabre than dying on Earth, ...
Sep 29, 2023 -
Re: The Unnamed Poem
I see this poem as someone with a big heart who loves all people dearly. The person cries because they feel intense amounts of frustration and sadness, but also because ...
Sep 28, 2023 -
Re: The End of the World
This is my first time reading a script and I have to say, I like it. Why would Landon do such a thing as kill his parents? There must have ...
Sep 27, 2023 -
Re: The Darkness
That ending was so sweet…I loved it. It seems like there is only Hell that awaits, until that one person shows up to help you out. It is hard for ...
Sep 26, 2023 -
Re: Dance With the Devil
I love this poem! It shows that The Devil is beautiful to entice others, to trick them. Kind of like how people deemed ”beautiful” by the majority of the world ...
Sep 25, 2023 -
Re: Sincerely, Yours- Chapter One: Through the Business Lane
William is going to Germany? Exciting! I wonder who this person that will bring romance to William’s life will be. He’s lucky that he got the job, now he has ...
Sep 24, 2023 -
Re: Round and Round Chapter 2
I have a feeling that Sylvia’s second attempt at killing herself and Jake isn’t going to work. Something is keeping them trapped in a loop. Or maybe it’s someone… I ...
Sep 23, 2023 -
Re: Round and Round Chapter 1
I did not expect that ending. I wonder now if that really happened. Maybe it was just a dream…or when Jake “wakes up”, he actually goes into the afterlife. What ...
Sep 22, 2023 -
Re: Highway of Darkness
It’s horrible to think that there are people like the men driving the kids away in real life. One wonders what goes on in the children’s minds…and in this story, ...
Sep 21, 2023 -
Re: The Task of Silence
I love the imagery. It’s very descriptive and fun. It gets you in the mood of the poem. The poem itself is cryptic enough to be a riddle, but clear ...
Sep 20, 2023 -
Re: Why Try Walking … When You Can Dance
I liked this story. Despite it all, Lisanne preserved. She has a really big heart, because I wouldn’t have kept quiet about what Katherine did. Lisanne’s Mom is the best! ...
Sep 19, 2023
