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Sinister Magick -Chapter 5: Realm Seekers

by Leya

Warning: This work has been rated 18+ for language, violence, and mature content.

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Chapter 5: Realm Seekers 


My mother had told me about Buyrn when I was eight. I remember reading stories about the magic that lies beyond further dimensions. I saw pictures filled with light and color, cities roared in action and people looked normal but—there was always something off.

I’d eventually start to have nightmares, of being trapped in a cell between two large walls, unable to escape. Now I know why those dreams were recurrent, it was the universe’s way of telling me to not only protect myself, but also my family.

Buyrn was more of a fairytale to me, I never thought it may have been real. If Malachi is anywhere, it’s there, in Buyrn, where entities live amongst the supernatural.

Once Sybil goes to sleep, I allow myself into my bedroom. Edris joins me, flicking the light on. Our eyes are tired, swollen—and our bodies are just about giving up. I sit on the edge of the bed and Edris looks at me.

I don’t need him to talk. I don’t need to hear anything. The silence is comfortable enough, and it’s about time my brain went blank for just a few seconds. We stayed there, staring at each other for a couple minutes. He then slides into bed, patting the open pillow next to him, and I allow myself to lay down as well.

Everything is quiet, the only sounds being the light echo of the crickets outside the window. A storm seemed to be brewing, the clouds rolling in above us, thunder distant in the sky.

Edris and I haven’t slept with each other in ages, and it feels wonderful to have some extra body heat. Malachi would sometimes sleep with me when he had nightmares, but it wasn’t the same. Edris is hot, warm, everything in between. His body radiates heat from every angle—and it gets cold here most nights.

As I flicker the light back off, I drift into a light sleep, my mind extending into a further place.

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I’m not sure how long we were asleep, but when my eyes open the light blinds me. We forgot to close the blinds last night, we were so tired, and the room is now lit up as if it’s midday. I can hear the birds chirping and noise downstairs in the kitchen—I’m guessing Sybil woke up before us.

I glance to my left and see Edris still passed out; his large muscular arm draped over his eyes like a sleeping mask. I forgot how attractive he was, and maybe beneath that cold personality is still the man I feel in love with.

I place a hand on his shoulder, and he jumps, throwing the quilt blanket off of his body and onto the floor. He sits up quickly, breathing heavily and glances at me as he stands, grabbing his shirt from the nightstand. I almost don’t want to get up and face the problem in front of us. I had hoped it was a dream, but to no avail when I didn’t hear Malachi crying, asking either Sybil or I to take him to the restroom. It was a morning routine for him.

“I need to work today,” He grumbles, heading for the closet. I let out a small sound, astonished that he could even say that. How could you work when your child is missing, and taken away by the goddess of witchcraft?

“You are not working,” I demand, standing on my feet and facing him, “I’ve dealt with you, for ten years, Edris, and I’m tired of feeling like you don’t care about this family anymore. If you don’t want to be a part of it, just say it, and pack your shitty clothes and get the hell out.”

Why even sleep in the same room as me last night? He went months without sleeping with me. Why did you start now if you’re just going to up and leave? I thought he’s just as worried about Malachi as I am. Now, I’m starting to question everything.

I’ve never snapped on him like this before, although this time it felt like the right thing to do. I’ve let him walk all over me, and right now I need my husband more than ever. Now is not the time for him to step out on us and go visit his mistress. That’s what he wants to do, go to ‘work’ and let out all of his stress by fucking his little toy. Not this time. Not while this is happening.

He pauses, shocked at my outburst, and grins, “Excuse me? Last time I checked, I’m a grown ass man, and I provide for this family—so shove whatever is bothering you right back up your ass. I don’t have time for this, I’m already late. Keep me updated on Malachi.”

He brushes past me, bumping his shoulder with mine while fiddling with the loose tie around his neck. He locks himself in the bathroom, moments later, the sound of the shower starting. Oh, how good a shower sounds right now…

I resist the urge to cry at his lack of attentiveness and change my dirtied clothes into something clean. I grabbed a pair of jeans and a regular blouse, and head downstairs to discuss with Sybil what our next moves are. I’m going to need her help in finding Malachi, and I still think I need to find Keenan, maybe he could talk to Hecate himself.

Sybil is sitting down at the bar, eating some pancakes she must’ve made earlier. I take a seat next to her and start devouring and apple that’s in the display bowl on the counter. She doesn’t look at me and instead begins to say, “All I’m seeing is fog. Thick, dense, fog and I don’t know what it means.

Easy answer.

“Hecate must’ve done some kind of enchantment to keep us from tracking him. Not strong enough to break your bond, I suppose,” I take another bite of my apple, the sour taste lingering on my lips.

“We’re going there, aren’t we?” She drops her fork and places her napkin in her lap.

“Yes,” I say, bluntly.

“How are we going to do this?”

“We do whatever we have to,” I respond, looking up at her. She looks sad today, defeated almost. Like she’s been up all night trying to figure out where her brother has been. It must be draining for her, “But I need to find your uncle Keenan first. I heard he’s in town. He may be of help.”

“Uncle Keenan?” She looks back at me, “I thought he hated you?”

“I did too. But he’s here, and we need his help. We leave in ten minutes.”

~

I finally find time to freshen up in the downstairs guest bathroom. Edris leaves shortly after, the loud grinding sound from the garage door marking his absence. He doesn’t say a word to me. When I exit the bathroom, Sybil and I gather our things; phones, purses, and two granola bars.

“There’s three inns here,” I say to her, leaning on the marbled countertop as she scrolls on her phone, “I can try and send him some type of signal, because the concierge won’t give out any personal information.”

“Or I can sneak up, and bang on every door,” She jokes, “It can’t be that hard. I’m supposed to be at school today, and Ryan was going to ask me out to homecoming.”

I’m not sure if she’s actually being serious. I scrunch my eyebrows and turn, heading towards the door, “You either come or you don’t. Nobody’s forcing you; but I could use your help, Sybil.”

She follows closely behind, her fingers still texting away on her phone, and I really do contemplate taking it away. What will you do in a zombie apocalypse? Text your friends? No, you’re going to hunt for food, shelter up, and stay alive. In our case, we need to find Keenan, find Malakai, and get rid of this spell once and for all.

I hop into the car and turn the key in the engine. I own a shitty old BMW, but it works, and I’m not the materialistic type. I’ve had this car for nine years, and until it completely dies on me, I’m not getting a new one—and I’m completely okay with that. Sybil always bothers me to invest in a new car; I never listen. I could really snap my fingers and make it appear, with magic, but what’s the fun in that? I never enjoyed the convenience of magic; I’d rather feel the satisfaction of earning what I own.

Sybil slides in the passenger seat, slowly putting her phone down as she glances out the window.

We arrive at Gentle Blossom Motel about six minutes later. Salem is a small town; it doesn’t take long to get anywhere; and that’s mostly why I decided to stay here. The motel looks dusty, old, and worn down; but there are some cars in the parking lot, so I assume they do some business. The tourists most likely help keep them open. Then again, tourists keep this whole town open.

We park, and I jump out of my old sedan. I take in the scenery, the yellow bushes, naked trees, and crooked motel sign. Sybil starts walking toward the doors first, and didn’t bother taking in the beauty nature had to offer on the way in. I guess that’s the difference in generations, or maybe it’s just a side effect of aging. Either way, our minds are nothing alike.

As we enter the motel, we notice the smell of cleaning products and incense. Almost every single place of business here burns incense, I’m guessing to enhance the whole ‘witchy experience’ Salem has to offer.

The front desk is made of old wood, the carvings very intricate and fine. A lady sits at the desk, her eyeballs glued to the computer in front of her. It doesn’t look like this place upgraded a bit, the large backpiece to the computer blocking her lips. The screen light reflects off of her glasses as she bites her thin lip, humming a tune lightly.

She doesn’t look up at us once, not even when Sybil steps up to her and begins to speak.

“Hello,” Sybil starts, studying the woman. She doesn’t glance up, “Is there anybody by the name of Keenan Xenia here?”

“I cannot disclose that information, private policy,” the receptionist murmurs, still focused on whatever she’s typing on that god awful computer. That thing looks to be about a thousand years old.

Sybil sighs and with a wave of her hand, the woman suddenly makes eye contact. It seems like Sybil put this woman under some sort of spell. The receptionist smiles, and opens a drawer to her right. She pulls out a mustard-yellow notebook, filled with names, room numbers, and credit card information.

“Room 316, Keenan Xenia,” she says, cheerfully.

“We appreciate it, thank you,” Sybil responds, backing up and moving in the direction of the stairs.

I never knew Sybil could use her magic so flawlessly, it almost seemed effortless. And she didn’t even say the chant, she drew upon the energy and manifested it. I wonder where she learned it from. I say nothing as I join her in the elevator.

The floor jerks suddenly before we start to move. The walls of the elevator are covered in cheap, plastic mirrors, and the buttons don’t even light up anymore. Back in high school and college, this was the place people would stay—and they’d consider it luxury. Now, it’s run down and smells like elderly people.

As the doors open, a gust of air pushes our hair back. The AC must be running on a hundred, which is weird because it’s rather cold outside. It’s like they’re pushing even colder air into an already freezing building.

We shuffle down the hallway until we get to room 316. I hesitate before I knock.

It takes a while, but the door handle shakes before it turns. My brother opens the door, his brown hair now shaved off, and his face goes pale. He’s gotten skinnier since I’ve last seen him; his blue tee-shirt stained with god only knows what.

“Kennan--,” I start, before he shuts the door in my face. 

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NadyaStatham
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Salutations, curious mind!



Rinisha is back here and ready to review 📚!

Buckle up, 'cause this is going to be a bumpy ride. I’m going to keep it short alright!✨

All in all

This party rocked, let's take a quick look!

Another great chapter of Sinister Magick.

I love the mother daughter duo even though they seem very distant from each other, not really bonded, I have a feeling we will get some more fun there. If that was not part of your plan, I would suggest you consider trying to add some of that in there.

E.g. let them vibe to some great music together and after a while realise that they can actually have fun together. And maybe you add a sentimental talk after that of why everything is as it is.

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I honestly think it is very rude of Edris to behave that way. I mean his son is missing and he thinks about work, who the …nothing does that. And by the way he adds, “Keep me posted.” Exsqueeze me Mr., that is not the way to talk about your son as if he is some kind of doctor's appointment.
(This is me reviewing as a reader no Criticism of your character though. I love the change and different personalities there. That is very on point!)

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Oehhh… The fact that Keenan just slammed the door right into Minerva's face leaves the reader with a mystery wondering why. And with thoughts of: Didn't they forgive each other already? Why did he do that? Did he do it for her own good, something like big brother protection or is there another reason lurking behind the doors of his inn room?

I wonder… No need for spoilers, just my thoughts as a reader.

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All in all, this was a very good chapter in my opinion as a reader. I love the build up of the suspension and the mention of the realistic feel of the car. It is so relatable that she is not bothering to buy a new one. You are doing a great job and I would definitely encourage you to continue it if that is your wish.

Have a nice day or night further! Keep writing! You are amazing!

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Hello there, other soul! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today!

And so it begins!

Top Graham Cracker - Edris is no big help to Minvera and leaves when he is needed, so Sybil and Minvera head off to find Keenan, who isn’t much of a big help either.

Slightly Burnt Marshmallow - I’ve got only one thing to point out and it’s really small. When Minvera says that she’s grabbing jeans and a blouse, you use “grabbed” instead of “grab”. The story is in the present tense, not the past. I make the same little mistake countless times, I fix it later.

Chocolate Bar - I love how you describe the relationship Minvera has between Edris and Sybil. With Edris, I see that Minvera can’t really trust him with anything and with Sybil, she loves her, but they are just too different to understand each other. It’s realistic and detailed.

Closing Graham Cracker - It seems like Minvera is closer to finding Malachi, even though Keenan shut the door in her face. She didn’t give up when she found out that Malachi was in Buryn and I don’t think that she will give up now.


Goodbye for now, other soul. Have a lovely day. :>

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Wors6ip
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Wors6ip wrote a review · Sun Nov 05, 2023 9:23 pm

Hello Leya! I have been waiting for the next chapter, and I'm excited to finally have some free time to read and review!

I unfortunately want to start this review off with a tiny nitpick, which I really think is the only thing that can be improved upon.

In our case, we need to find Keenan, find Malakai, and get rid of this spell once and for all.

Malachi's name was misspelt from how it's usually spelt here in this sentence.
“Kennan--,” I start, before he shuts the door in my face.

Same case here. Keenan's name is misspelt from how it usually is.
Trust me when I say that's the only sort of "complaint" I have for this chapter.

Edris and Sybil annoyed me a little bit in this chapter. Edris choosing to go to work when his son is actively missing, and Sybil being upset that she's missing being asked to homecoming is so baffling to me. I would sort of understand where Edris is coming from is he was the sole provider for the family, but Minerva mentioning she'd rather work for what she has also hints at her having her own source of income. Unless I'm completely misreading here, I really don't think it would completely destroy their finances to miss one day of work.

Sybil is a little more mixed though. One on hand, she's upset at missing school, but here, she also seems in distress at what's happening:
“We do whatever we have to,” I respond, looking up at her. She looks sad today, defeated almost. Like she’s been up all night trying to figure out where her brother has been. It must be draining for her, “But I need to find your uncle Keenan first. I heard he’s in town. He may be of help.”

I guess you can blame that on the teenage brain, which I get, because my priorities were really wacked up when I was a few years younger. It adds some complexity to her character and makes her more realistic given her age.

Buyrn was also interesting to learn about. The whole "everything is normal, but something about it is off" concept has always been scary to me. In fact, it's one of the few things in the horror genre that still truly scare me. Seeing that idea hinted at makes me super stoked for what you have in store. Buyrn has a lot of potential to be something truly scary, if that's what you're planning on going for.

Once again, you have done a wonderful job at ending out the chapter making me want more: you seem to have a talent for that. I thought finally seeing Keenan was going to make me excited, but the description of him has me a bit nervous. He sounds like he a hit a rough patch, but it has me wondering if he's like that because of Minerva. Since she's the one who raised him back from the dead, will he progressively get weaker the longer they're away from each other? It would make sense why he's back in town without trying to meet up, if he's just trying to get some energy back.

Wonderful job as usual, and happy writing!



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