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Re: [Light floods in- - -]
This poem was short,but sweet.Now,the lights could mean anything.They could be taken literally,as in actual lights or they could be the small glimmer of hope that is in everyone’s life,which ...
Sep 14, 2021 -
Re: An Odyssey of Love
What a beautiful poem! Your description beautifully explains perfectly the meaning of love and how it can change us for the favorite lines were these last ones:”The water was honey,sugar ...
Sep 13, 2021 -
Re: The Years of the Morning Light (Prelude)
I wonder what will happen with Jina and Chiku.This is an exciting story and I can't wait for it to continue! My favorite part was when they accidentally bumped into ...
Sep 12, 2021 -
Re: All-American (Witch) Girl: One
I love reading about witches,magic and mayhem,So,I'd thought I'd give this story a try.I liked it so far.I can't wait to see what happens to Minnie and what will become ...
Sep 11, 2021 -
Re: A Tisket, A Tasket
hmm...Suspenseful,interesting story here.I'm not sure if the protagonist is a hero or a villain.Maybe they're both.Who knows? I wonder what the story is it about someone who murders people that ...
Sep 10, 2021 -
Re: Terra
Mesmerizing poem.I love how you describe the sky as a place "Where the view never ends." It makes it seem like there is a whole world in the sky that ...
Sep 9, 2021 -
Re: Stage Fright
I enjoyed this poem.I love how in the end,when the person leaves,they felt as if they were being shows how damaged they are on the inside for being on a ...
Sep 8, 2021 -
Re: Blue
I enjoyed this poem talking about the color blue and how it could be more than just a color.It's lovely and poetic! My favorite parts were these lines:"Blue is the ...
Sep 7, 2021 -
Re: To See You Again
Cool poem.I like how the character reminiscences about the past and how things were easier back then.We all want to go back to when things were favorite parts are these ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Not here for now
Good tells us,the readers,that the devil isn't evil and probably never even was.He only wants us to live favorite parts were these lines:"Oh,I lived life wrongly.Only thing I achieved was ...
Sep 5, 2021 -
Re: PHOENIX
This was a cool poem.I like Phoenixs,because they rise from the ashes and this poem captured the meaning and magic of The Phoenix favorite part in the poem is the ...
Sep 4, 2021 -
Re: on ambivalence
Interesting poem.I liked how you wrote sounds like it could have many different meanings,but you don't tell us what those meanings is for us to figure out and I love ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: A genius's encyclopaedic answer sheet
It's a cool poem.The student sounds like they are giving the teacher a hard time,but yet,the answers that the student is giving are intelligent,because they know the answers,but want to ...
Sep 2, 2021 -
Re: Automotomophobia
Wow! This was magical and poetic! My favorite part is how the character starts off sad when looking at the puppets,but looks back and feels whole again.I loved this lesson ...
Sep 1, 2021 -
Re: It’s just a day
Cool was short,but sweet.I love how you mention that anyone's feelings for someone can come out at any moment,in any conversation.Even if it's just about "The Russian revolution and pickled ...
Aug 31, 2021
