Villian in my own story
Waking up from a dream to a nightmare
We are not the same
Different category
Why can't we just leave this life?
The Bible say it's mandatory
I'll live forever
Lol, maybe just a century
Everyone has their past
Here is one of mine
I once tried jumping of my dormitory
Mid air then I realized;
Fuck this building is multi-storey
Afterwards,
I came to a cold realization
My own existence is now history
people ask is there an after-life
Well, all I can say
I'm in purgatory
I saw the devil
He was in an offertory
The devil said
"THIS IS MY TERRITORY"
In honesty
The devil isn't what the books say
His presence was full of glory
I couldn't breathe
Fuck, what is wrong
I'm having a pain
I think it's respiratory
His messages were clear
Better than that of the Bible
He had an Auditory
Only message I got
Don't live life in a worry
Then i figured
Oh, I lived life wrongly
Only thing I achieved
Was to exit it in a hurry
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Interesting writing, thank you for sharing! I love how well it flows. I love the simple sentences, one after the other. It is a very quick read, so that’s another thing I enjoyed.
I like how you made the writing feel very casual. With the LOL and the oh, etc. Feels very narrative and is not daunting to read. Thank you very much for writing and I hope to see more soon
Ellie
Good poem.It tells us,the readers,that the devil isn't evil and probably never even was.He only wants us to live life.My favorite parts were these lines:"Oh,I lived life wrongly.Only thing I achieved was to exit it in a hurry."
This tells us to not worry so much about life.Good job on the poem!