Hello! Ell here with a review!
~First impressions: This is so sweet! This poem feels silly and lighthearted, and very genuine. It reminds me of falling in love for the first time, all made up of innocent reasons.
I really like how open ended this poem is. There's like a million different ways to interpret it. Personally, it feels like a one-sided love that becomes requited after years of waiting. Very much in-love-with-your-best-friend vibes.
I also really like how you contrast words and lengths of time, especially in the last two lines:
Suddenly -
And without end
This bit seems contradictory, but I think it highlights the absurd, funny, amazing way love can be- there's not always an explanation.
Overall, I LOVE this poem. I think we get a lot of heavy, deep poetry about love, so it's really refreshing to read something that highlights the silliness of it. The only note I really had was try to work on focusing your train of thought in poems. Sometimes we can get a little too vague, and the flow of the poem gets dropped. But, in general, awesome job!
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Reviews: 26
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