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Re: CLICK
I liked this poem,it was fun to read.Maybe this person feels lost about who they are and what their purpose in life is.They want to be positive and happy,but can ...
Nov 25, 2021 -
Re: Wonderland
I liked this poem,it was cool! I loved how you described Wonderland in a few short lines.I also liked that you mentioned Dorothy,she and Alice kind of have the same ...
Nov 24, 2021 -
Re: Admission of the Whimsical
Lovely poem! I think this is about a common type of side character we may read about in fairytales and how they are overlooked.Maybe,it’s them sharing their feelings.Maybe this person ...
Nov 23, 2021 -
Re: I Will Always Stand by You
This was a sweet really shows that no matter what,the narrator will always stand by whoever they are addressing in the also shows that there are still people who will ...
Nov 22, 2021 -
Re: hell's angel
Oh wow…this poem scared me a bit.(In a good way) I thought this was about an angel getting rejected and sent to Hell,from the title,but after actually reading it,I think ...
Nov 21, 2021 -
Re: A broken piece
I loved reading this story! It really makes you think about who you are to your makes you wonder about your true intentions and your darkest secrets.The mirrors could all ...
Nov 20, 2021 -
Re: Storyteller Serves a Meal
I loved the poem.I thought it did nicely to explain the purpose and goals of the storyteller.The dishes symbolizes the stories the storyteller was telling.That’s another thing,I loved the use ...
Nov 19, 2021 -
Re: The Way It Changed
This was a fun story to read.About the ending…is Emma going to die? Also,can we trust Aiden? In this story,Aiden comes off as a loving boyfriend,but often,people that we trust ...
Nov 18, 2021 -
Re: The Corn Grows Towards The Sky
Cool and sad poem.I believe the poem talks about the things that happen which you can’t control in life.I thought it was interesting to choose the words:”I look around and ...
Nov 17, 2021 -
Re: Exit 17
I enjoyed reading this was sweet and romantic.I also enjoyed the writing style,how you added numbers and punctuation marks to the words and how you put parentheses in the some ...
Nov 16, 2021 -
Re: Nightmare
Oooh…cool poem.I love how ominous it the main character a good person or have they done unforgivable things in the past and now,they’re going to pay their debt for it? ...
Nov 15, 2021 -
Re: Potterer
I liked this poem.I can see why one would fear to have such a power,the power of creation.While you can create wonderful masterpieces with this power,you could also cause a ...
Nov 14, 2021 -
Re: Manic Pixie
Lovely poem! It sounded just like a children’s fairytale.The fact that the poem says that pixies can be broken,shared and put into jars,says what the narrator thinks about pixies.Maybe,pixies are ...
Nov 13, 2021 -
Re: What Does it Mean to Dream
What does it mean to dream and to live? Those are both good questions that could have different answers,neither of them wrong.These are my answers,someone else may think dream is ...
Nov 12, 2021 -
Re: motion picture ghosts and other pleasantries
This was an interesting poem.I don’t think that this is a romance poem.I feel like the narrator believes it’s romance and love,but it’s far from it.The narrator feels protective to ...
Nov 11, 2021
