cleverclogs

Hello! cleverclogs here for a review day review! I'm going to jump right in with some nitpicky things. You have a few mistakes in this, like tense switches and run-on ...

Hello there! A few nitpicks before I begin reviewing content: The concrete turns to quick sand Quicksand is one word. I can't breath when I see your name written on ...

Hello there, and welcome to YWS, by the way. I'm sure you'll have a great time. :) The first thing I'm going to say has already been pointed out, but ...

Hello there, unknown! Whatever nitpicking there was to do with this work has already been covered by thewriter13, so it looks like I'll be reviewing content here. :) New logic ...

Wow! This really is a great poem! I loved the metaphor for society and the emotion you put into it. The last line was absolute perfection. It was just so ...

Hello there! It's always difficult to judge the rhyming and rhythm of lyrics based on how they sound while reading them straight, since they're always very different once they're put ...

Hello there! I get the feeling that this is supposed to be a sort of riddle, and I'm very disappointed in myself for looking down at Astronaut's review and spoiling ...

Hello there, and welcome to YWS, by the way. :) When I clicked into this, I was expecting it to be a sort of stereotypical teenage drama sort of thing, ...

Hello there, Pinkieishere1345! (A.K.A Pinkiegirl13's sister :)) While I personally think that Sportywriter should learn the difference between trolling and negative feedback, I'm not going to comment

Hello there, and welcome to YWS! You'll have a blast, I promise you. :) So, the very first sentence of this threw me off. The infinite darkness above me, gave ...

Hello there! Before I begin my review, I just want to say that this is really cute and sweet! I enjoyed reading it. I do have a few suggestions, though. ...

Hello there, wisegirl! I like the repetition and formatting in this poem. Especially since formatting for poetry is so difficult on this site. The poem is very consistent the whole ...

Hello there, and welcome to YWS by the way. :) Quick nitpick: I feel abandoned, I feel alone, I feel invisible. The commas in this sentence should either be periods ...

I totally understand where you're coming from with all of this, even though I don't agree with some of it. I, for one, was delighted to find a site that ...

Hello there! The first thing I noticed when I read this was the title. All the exclamation points are very off-putting to me, and I almost didn't bother reading this ...