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Hey there! clogs here to review! This is a sweet poem. It's very gentle and tender with its emotion. That being said, I have a few suggestions: I'm a huge ...

Hey there! clogs here to review! I have to say I really enjoyed this. The rhymes were very well executed with the imagery, and the rhythm was mostly smooth. A ...

Hey there! clogs here to review! Overall, I think there are two main things this poem is lacking: Organization and emotion. So let's start with organization. You have a lot ...

Hey there! clogs here to review! First up: Typo alert. "Where" should be "were". Now, onto the actual review: This just reads like a couple of events for me. It's ...

I honestly don't quite understand why this is posted as a literary work. If your sole purpose here was to actually teach people how to make origami stars, then why ...

Hey there! clogs here to review! I'm just going to jump right in and talk about organization: I'm not really getting much out of the short lines. To me, they ...

You certainly seem to have attracted all the Ohio people, haha. This was quite a nice poem. I think the structure was interesting and well-executed, and the metaphor with the ...

Hey there, and happy Review Day! clogs here to review! So I went and read the first chapter before reviewing this, and my first question is: What happened the storm? ...

Hey there, and happy Review Day! clogs here to review! Dragons! Sounds pretty interesting. I'm never really a fan of pictures being in literary works (or on book covers, if ...

Hi there, and happy Review Day! clogs here to get your work out of the Green Room! First things first: You've got to break up that paragraph at the bottom ...

Hey there, and happy Review Day! clogs here to review! I'm gonna start with a bit of line-by-line: One day in a bright and sunny day This line's a little ...

Hey there! clogs here to review! Before I start, I just have to get this out of the way: Do not pity the dead, Harry. Pity the living. And above ...

Hey there! clogs here for a quick review! This was a fun piece! I'm normally not a fan of the no punctuation style, but I think it worked really well ...

Hey there! clogs here to review! I'm not sure why you would spend 200 points to post just a couple of paragraphs. Why not go ahead and post the whole ...

Hey there! clogs here to review! Not sure why this is in the "other" category, because it sure reads like a poem to me. I think that part of the ...