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Re: I Was Poor
The words used personally remind me of what my literature teacher tells me of how broad the writer could be. Poetry is supposed to be like this,its just amazing how ...
Oct 17, 2012 -
Re: sleepless
This reminds me of how desperate I usually am when I wake up and wish to have the words that could express the wonder of the morning. How I wish ...
Oct 17, 2012 -
Re: Beautiful Girl
amazing stuff! For such a young age I wouldn't have thought that one would come up with such an amazing art. I can't think of such language for a 13-yr ...
Oct 17, 2012 -
Re: Alone
hey there,I know this is a late response to your article but I just can't stop to wonder at how well you put together such words that are simply touching. ...
Oct 17, 2012 -
Re: thanks for the wings
ummm....are you sure you are 15? OMG!OMG! this is,for sure, a true expression of how wonderful and paranormal this generation is and am totally loving it. Your poem reminds me ...
Oct 17, 2012 -
Re: From Father to Son
amazing.... I wonder how you were able to use such amazing words that indeed do touch the heart of a reader. This reminds me of how touchy the scarlet letter ...
Oct 17, 2012 -
Re: If I Love Him
This is too good but the heart-break at the end of it is just amazingly hurtful....definitely perfect in concern to art. Words that simply cause the reader to be absorbed ...
Oct 12, 2012 -
Re: Kiss
Wow... tht's harsh but Its quite appropriate for all who try to mess up with pipz and they never seem to care. Simple but I like the fact that The ...
Oct 11, 2012 -
Re: Joy
AMAZING STUFF! OMG! I really can't believe what I have read;It's just soooo... good! How I wish that some day I would reach a point where I would easily express ...
Oct 10, 2012 -
Re: I'm Sorry (My Mistake)
The writer I would say really has the capture of what the heart says but eventually the words used,though are showing perfectibility in the language, are quite shallow. But as ...
Oct 10, 2012 -
Re: Just Go away..
Creativity beyond the mere expectations of an ordinary mind. Emotions are well defined and expertly portrayed.T he grammar is surely good enough that it has created such a good foundation ...
Oct 9, 2012 -
Re: One hundred thirty-three
First and foremost i would like to congratulate you on how bold and determined you are!However you were able to come up with such a structure is wonderful and I ...
Oct 7, 2012 -
Re: I Am Who I Am
Concise but eventually holds such a powerful message to all who have struggles. The poem may not have much language but the writer has found it worthy to just show ...
Oct 7, 2012 -
Re: Frosty Still
Grammatical errors are not a hinderance to how well the author has clearly portrayed his/her gift in showing how to put realism on paper. The lat stanza captured me most ...
Oct 5, 2012 -
Re: Lady in the park
an art that seems to show many that whatever emotion can be made a hardcopy
Oct 5, 2012
