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i love this poem. To me it kind of means that sometimes we want to further ourselves but lose sight of what is really important to us and by the we realize just what we had it is too late and all you can do is hope that you can fix it with time
the poem helped me in many ways.....Thanks!
really, how?
The writer I would say really has the capture of what the heart says but eventually the words used,though are showing perfectibility in the language, are quite shallow. But as I said it really has captured me as an individual and reminds me of the importance of being meek and repentant.
Chris:)
The poem may have the simplest words but it has the strongest most deep meaning to me.... thanks
i love this poem, some times in life we decide to go our separate parts, elevating ourselves and sometimes some people get stringed on... its not that we willfully do it but how do we let go of our entire past? i think this is what this poem is about and i could relate to it and i love it....