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Creativity beyond the mere expectations of an ordinary mind. Emotions are well defined and expertly portrayed.T he grammar is surely good enough that it has created such a good foundation for the amazing art that is visible to any living being. A true expression of the consequence of love and the power that it holds in any society in our present world. Cheers,
Chriskabz(Kenya,Nairobi)
Hi there, I liked the context and meaning of your poem, but honestly, I think it doesn't flow very well. It feels like you were focusing on the rhyming more than the natural feeling. If you don't understand what i just said, then it's okay, I don't think i understand either.
All I want to say is, try letting the poem flow naturally rather than trying hard to make it rhyme. Good luck.