chancesnchanges

Whoa, the poem flows smoothly and it's nice.. i liked the message as well.. Keep going,.. =)

Whoa, i like this piece of yours. There is the feeling of wanted to be accepted but concealing his/her own identity. But I must say that you should be able ...

The story has a continuous flow and the main character portrays someone who wants to improve not only for himself but also for his special one -- his wife. The ...

Personally, i like the message you that you are conveying in your poem... I can overcome the obstacles that you throw in my path, I can. It tells you to ...

Whoa, this is nice. i like how you constructed the lyrics and how the lines go together smoothly,.. You have constructed what others are feeling -- concealing what's inside them, ...

This piece of yours is inspiring, reminding us not to give up easily. I suddenly recalled what my teacher had shared to us in class -- "Everything is hard while ...

It was love at first sight that continues to grow, something he conceals for a long which she doesn't know. Scared of the outcome if he opens his mouth to ...

Whoa, i like this piece of yours. It ain't choppy, the first line goes smoothly to the next and so on. You made us feel that your love for your ...

Though it feels weird for some, many still likes the feeling of entering their own "fantasy world" -- where they can freely express what they are thinking. Probably, in the ...

It felt that you wanted your emotions -- happiness and/or sadness roll and be washed and be hidden by the pouring rain. You might not want that to end but ...

Your piece was like a suspense for me... at the start. The character was in despair wanting to reach out but it felt like no one is offering a hand. ...

hooh,.. This piece of yours has a lot of emotions that's with it, feelings that you want your readers to feel -- like pain, sadness, being carefree, going through hard ...

In the title i was 'What might this be?' but upon reading it, whoa i liked it.. Now, i am wondering what it sounds like -- its melody or tune.. ...

Whoa, nice piece. Personally, i like the last stanza because sometimes we don't notice the small things since we're always or most of the time focused on other stuffs. But ...

This is cute. i enjoyed reading this and fascinating because i haven't expected that this article will come from a man's point of view. felt different but sweet at the ...