chancesnchanges

Hi! sammydavy.. chancesnchanges here.. =) I want to say that I like the words you used in describing, especially in the view. It made me picture the place his looking ...

While reading your piece, it conveyed to me a light and a calm atmosphere. Then, a touch of care and concern with sweetness unknowingly shown because it comes out naturally ...

Hi! MatiasD.. Welcome to YWS.. hahahah... I enjoyed reading your story. Even though, you said you can't stay on one topic but you know what, the flow is smooth and ...

Hi! thewritersdream.. The mood is light and calm. Thus, i enjoyed reading it. I find it cute. In every darkness, the light will come and more than what we could ...

You seem to be pessimistic and she's optimistic.. You follow and she leads.. You're laid back and she's adventurous.. You're quite shy while she's hyper.. You're the inhabitant and she's ...

Hi! Shloka19.. Whoa, i like this. The notion, content and the challenge of this. In everything, we must give our best. Even though it will only last for a short ...

Hi! SabrinaB3RI... Whoa, the concept of using a masquerader was somewhat new for me and i like it. It makes others curious of the person behind the mask. Also, the ...

Hi! Angelorchid.. Aww, this is so sweet and romantic. It leaves a smile after reading it. Your readers can imagine what was actually happening in your story. The pain that ...

Hi! Lylas... The title of your piece says something about a fresh start and that made me curious. So while reading you work it tells a love of a lady ...

Hi! birdsfly97.. Welcome to YWS.. The flow of your piece is continuous and the topic is nice. Describing how high our dreams or desires are. That they are so rare ...

Hi! chancesnchanges here.. Welcome to YWS.. I felt the emotions that you wanted to bring out in your piece. The boredom, happiness, excitement and regret that your character is going ...

Hi! Angelorchid.. chancesnchanges here.. Welcome to YWS.. I would like to say that i was captured by your title -- "Guardian Angel", i like it. It made me curious of ...

Whoa, nice piece. The introduction of the characters, their escape from their luxurious lives and their unexpected meeting, i like those. It was like love at first sight and the ...

Whoa, it felt like there's a bit of personification for me. Though, it's a metaphor. The ending seems tragic which is sad for me but i liked the comparison and ...

Hi! chancesnchanges here.. I liked the craftiness you used to describe friendship. They way you relate it to the life of a butterfly. I agree that we became friends to ...