ajruby12

Hey! AJ here to review. First off, what an interesting idea! You honestly don't see much romance in poetry. I think it's an excellent idea. But... There's a few issues. ...

Hey! AJ here for a quick review. First off, thank you!! You used punctuation! :) (It makes it so much easier to read in my book) Anywhoo, this was such ...

Hey! AJ here to review. Okay, so I will probably make this comment on every poem I review. But I think that this poem could use some punctuation. Even just ...

Hey! AJ here for a short review! First off, I have a distinct style I like for poetry, but it's obviously not everyone's opinion on it. So I will by-pass ...

Hey! ajruby here for a quick review. First off, welcome! :) And now onto the review. I love the imagery in this poem and just as an idea, I think ...

Hey! ajruby here for a review. Okay, first, I love that you rhymed here! It makes it flow better, in my own opinion. But there are a few things I'd ...

Hey! ajruby12 here for a quick review! All right, so I often review poetry and so I get to see a lot of works, and most of them don't use ...

Hey! ajruby here for a quick review. I'm a loyal Red team member, so I really appreciated this! (And also outside of loyalty, I love it as well.) A few ...

Hey! ajruby here for a quick (I hope..) review! I really like these lyrics! But just a couple suggestions. 1. Maybe a little more variety in your words and longer ...

Hey! ajruby here to review. Now, this is one of those poems that I have a hard time with, since I don't really grasp the concept. It has beautiful words ...

Hey! ajruby here to review! All right, there's some techinical stuff to be addressed. 1. "Take a look at yourself do you look so bad?" Either make it two seperate ...

Hey! ajruby here to review. Wow.. This was such a marvelous thing to break up the routine of reading, reviewing, reading, reviewing... I really love this poem! And I nearly ...

Hey! ajruby here to review! I was fascinated by the word pictures you made in this poem. It really draws the reader into your mind. But I was a bit ...

Hey! ajruby here to review! I really like this poem! I think it represents the "struggle" of someone who has difficulty with stammering. It's very creative and I really like ...

Hey! ajruby here to review! Nit-picky stuff first.. 1." Instead she gave the task" I believe there should be a comma between "instead" and "she". 2. "Happy to help his ...