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Winter257

  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Happy

    Hello there, gonna leave you with a brief review! (: So, I really like this poem. The first stanza/part of any poem is important, as it can either draw your ...

    Oct 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Never Forget You

    Hey there, gonna review this for ya quick! So, I absolutely love the message behind this poem. It shouldn't matter what skin color we have, we're all the same, and ...

    Oct 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 4: The Journey Begins

    Hey there, gonna leave a brief review for your story quickly. :D So, I blew through all of the chaptors you have up. And I must say, I love this ...

    Oct 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1 My first encounter

    Hello! I love zombies, so your story intrigued me >~> So, you have a very good story here! The description was great, and the characters were realistic as well. Now, ...

    Oct 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: "The name I forgot to ask"

    Hello there! Gonna leave a brief review for ya. So, overall, I think you have a great basis for a story! Everything is there to formulate a story, but it ...

    Oct 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Heart Break With Hetalia: Day 1

    Okay, im only going to leave a brief review. Overall: I loved this! The way you so easily conveyed the personalities within this story, was stunning. And the first thing ...

    Oct 18, 2015
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Selfishly Waiting

    Hello, gonna review your lyrics quickly! So, overall, I loved your use of repetition within this. The only part that I didn't like was "None of the couches in the ...

    Oct 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Pond

    Hello there, gonna leave you a review. So, my first and most important suggestion is to separate these huge chunks of writing, into paragraphs, so as to make it easier ...

    Oct 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Humor Re: One Lucky Towel

    Hey again! Gonna leave you another review :D So... first I must say, oh my xD When I saw the title I wasn't sure what I was in for, and ...

    Oct 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: A Slice Of Blood

    Hey there! I was gonna leave a review last night, but I fell asleep before I could... so here goes :D I loved this poem, quite a bit. It's short, ...

    Oct 17, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Forget You

    Hey there! Gonna leave you a review real quickly. :D So, I really enjoyed this poem! It's easy to relate to, for anyone whose ever been betrayed or left behind ...

    Oct 17, 2015
  • Other » Literature, Other Re: The Tragedy of Words

    Hey there! Stumbled across this, and decided to leave you a review! :D So, firstly I'd like to say that this could qualify for poetry, but I see that you ...

    Oct 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: The Infected take over

    Okay, im a huge zombie fan, so I was quite happy to stumble onto this story. Here's a review for you.... So, overall, you have a great basis for this ...

    Oct 16, 2015
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Romantic Re: We Will Fly

    Hey there! Gonna leave you with a review quick. :D Overall, I think your song is well written. I liked the light-hearted feel it had. There was only one part, ...

    Oct 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Teen Fiction Re: Panic Attack Part One

    Hey there! Gonna review this for you quickly. Overall, I think this is interesting. I love how, in the first paragraph, you compare one's ribs to a cage when the ...

    Oct 16, 2015


Today I bent the truth to be kind, and I have no regret, for I am far surer of what is kind than I am of what is true.
— Robert Brault