WinnyWriter

Whoa, this is intense! I think I like it, though. It just sounds like it could go somewhere exciting. Your spelling and punctuation have a few basic errors, but I ...

Hey! This is a nice work, and so creative! Your concept and your choice of words are both captivating. It is evident that you put thought into what you wrote ...

Hey, there! This is a cool story! I feel like there's an element of mystery to the fact that something bad happens each time a festival is held. You have ...

Hey, there! Great poem!! This sort of love poem has a little bit of a different twist than many others, which gives it a new flavor. The way you have ...

Hey, there! Nice work going on. I like how you show the grasp that the narrator is in. It appears to be one of those situations where she is experiencing ...

Hey, there! Nice poem! I like the repetitive rhyming. A lot of poems don't have that, but the way you've used it here keeps the reader moving to the end. ...

Hey, again! I really like this chapter, as always! I think I'm more in suspense now than ever before. If I haven't said this before, you really have a talent ...

Hello, fellow writer! Nice poem here. I like the way you worked in the rhyme. It is a thought-provoking work, and it definitely has the capacity to stir emotions. The ...

Hey, there! You mentioned that this was out a while ago, and I've just now gotten to reviewing it, so sorry for the delay. Once again, it is very well ...

Hey, there! This is a nicely written piece. I like how you've focused on the heartbeat to symbolize love rather than dwelling on physical features. Using the heartbeat shows that ...

Hey, there. This piece reflects the reality of anxiety well. Having been there myself, I can understand the feeling that some methods seem utterly useless, and one wishes the source ...

Hey, there. My sympathies go out to you. I know how dark and helpless it can feel to be in depression. Just remember that you don't need to feel pressed ...

This is a nice work of poetry. Your illustration using the moon and stars really gets across the concept of unreachableness (is that a word??) that you're getting at. It ...

Hey, there! Nice poem. I like the mental pictures you create with your wording. It shows a unique beauty. The whole thing gives an idea of a sort of tranquility, ...

Hey, there. You've got an interesting plot going on. It's always captivating when a writer introduces a sense of mystery and doesn't explain all the details right away. I like ...