WallFlower

Hi! Happy Review Day! I know people have already pointed out the formatting, so i won't harp on it :) You have a really good story here. It feels very ...

Hello! WallFlower here :) For a first poem this is good! It's really sweet and you did well with rhyming. You also had a good consistency with your rhythm. Nice ...

Hi there :) First off, this is such a difficult topic to review, so I will stick strictly to the technical side. I think GoldFlame already covered the rest. It ...

Hi there :) I really like the style and flow of this poem. It took me a little bit to get used to pattern, but once I was used to ...

You're right. I'm thoroughly confused. I mean, I think I get it. I do get it, abstractly. I have no gramatical nitpicks, partially because I was confused... I think you ...

Hi there :) The imagery in this poem is great. The idea of clouds being stitches is amazing. I never would have thought of that! :) Your metaphors are wonderful. ...

Hi there :) Wow, this was really sweet. I know you meant this as poetry, but it almost sounded like a song to me. It flows really well. I know ...

Hi there :) Even though this is so short, there is a lot of depth to it. It seems so bittersweet. She's asking him to risk everything for her. It's ...

Hi there :) First, I can really relate to the things you're saying. It's beautifully written, and even without the poetic format it reads like poetry. The English monster in ...

Hi there :) Wow, I REALLY like this! Please continue writing it. You just dropped me off the biggest cliff ever at the end... I need more! Is this guy ...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! You had me laughing out loud for more than half of that. You are really good at writing humor! I think the funniest thing about this whole guide is ...

Hi there :) This reminds me SO much of me and my sister (her being Ross, of course :P ) You got the sibling rivalry emotions exactly right. Your descriptions ...

Hi there :) First, you know that an Epilogue typically goes at the end of a story, right? The Prologue goes at the beginning. Now, on to the story. Since ...

Hi there :) This is a really beautiful song. I don't know how you would sing it, but in my head it sounded really good. :) I'm a huge fan ...

Hi there :) First, I really like the idea of writing this like a dream. It’s interesting and new, and I think it worked. Although the grammar monster in me ...