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Re: The Paths
This is Kaos here for a review. So the first thing I noticed about this is the only punctuation that you use in this is periods at the end of ...
Dec 30, 2016 -
Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 8
This is Kaos here for a review! Rather short chapter, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, but let's jump fright into it. I enjoy seeing the name Novah as it's ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: The Third Son - Chapter Six of Shattered Crowns
This is Kaos here for a review. The first thing that I wanted to bring up with this is that you tend to have a lot of internal monologue going ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat - Prologue
This is Kaos here for a review! I liked that you kept this prologue short. Often prologues fall to the weakness of being really long and being boring, but that ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: To Be a Dragonry Pt 4
This is Kaos here for a review! The start of the chapter didn't really do much to interest me or draw me in but this changed as the chapter went ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Ashura: A World of Sword and Magic Chapter 3
This is Kaos here for a review! The start with "1 day ago" is something that confused me since it's the third chapter, is this some kind of look-back or ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Samsung's Explosive Note 7 Recall- the "TRUTH" behind it all!
This is Kaos here for a review! The first thing that I wanted to tackle about this article is the size of the paragraphs. Instead of having each part of ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Cataclysm: Chapter 2; Harley
This is Kaos here for a review! The first thing that I noticed was the name of the character. While this doesn't seem to be a fanfiction you have the ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: The New Generation--Chapter 20: Home
This is Kaos here, jumping in for a review! At first I thought that this was a crossover with Star Wars and Percy Jackson and I found out that it ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: I Was Nominated As Fiction Writer of the Year
This is Kaos here for a review! So I didn't really find this to be as much of an article as it is more of a memoir? It's an article ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: kaiego, first few pages
This is Kaos here for a review! So the first thing that I noticed about this first chapter is the large blocks of text with the first few paragraphs. I ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: The Basics of Living
This is Kaos here for a review, in other words, getting this out of the Green Room. We see that this is just more of a list or a thought ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: A Falling Out of Love with Spring
This is Kaos here for a review! So I liked the structure of the poem in that it looked pretty, but I also wouldn't mind if you scaled the poem ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Dear Amelia Rose
This is Kaos here for a review! So I didn't like this poem as much as the other one that I reviewed recently. I see that this tackles the idea ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Wierdest Philosophy of Life
This is Kaos here for a review! [Just wanted to let you know first off before I jump into my review that "Wierdest" is spelled "Weirdest" and it really bugged ...
Dec 29, 2016