VampireSenshi

Hey! Great poem, love the theme! As someone who has struggled in the past with perseverance and the need to go on even when stuff gets hard - I can ...

I really like this poem! I think that it's wonderfully creative and you made pretty good use of imagery and rhyme, and while I think the context of the muse ...

Alright- can I just say that I love this really a whole lot? Like a lot a lot. I read the title and I thought it'd end up being a ...

Hello Tuxedomask! It's good to see such a new member jumping into the YWS'sphere, you've already posted a story! That's allready more productive than my first night on YWS. If ...

I love this! It's so simple! One word, with so much emotion! What does it mean? I guess it's in the eyes of the reader. To me it reminds me ...

So this may not be your best, but what makes it awesome is the pure, raw emotion that just radiates from it! I love it! Especially because I've seen this ...

So, what to say about this... I can't really see it very much. In fact, I can't see it at all. I don't know if that's just my computer being ...

Can I just say that I LOVE this? I myself am a poet, and I think this is a very good way to look at BEING a poet. As for ...

Hmmm - as for grammar. You look good! I didn't see anything suspicious looking in the grammar department. But one thing, If you're going to have substantial dialogue; I suggest ...

HEY PIXIE!!! I enjoyed this poem, a lot; I really enjoy the simple irony in the rhymes. Although I think you could have been a little more abstract on what ...

This is very good! I lived Japan, so I definitely know about how much emotion and detail you can put into a haiku. You know something really cool is, I've ...

Wow, just, wow... This was really good! Once or twice it gave me shivers, the details are just perfect, no over-describing (which is what I usually do). It's very interesting, ...

Oh my goodness, I really enjoyed this poem! I would almost classify it as an epic, mostly because it's longer, and it contains an (almost) complete story too it. In ...

Rocky! I officially love your poetry! It inspires me so much! It makes me think. I really like how this poem flows, like a river of emotion. At one point, ...

I really like your style Rocky! The lines are short, small, but so full of emotion and meaning. Sometimes the best poetry is the most simple, ones like a story. ...