HEY PIXIE!!!
I enjoyed this poem, a lot; I really enjoy the simple irony in the rhymes. Although I think you could have been a little more abstract on what kind of hell (sorry, Dante's Inferno ruins you forever) - considering there are many types of hell. Different religious reproduced of heaven, and hell.
And that would be my only critique, I'm not allowed to be a Grammar Nazi or Spelling Nazi because I'm a horrible speller, plus I didn't see any
Good Job Pix! Keep Writing!
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