Published September 27, 2012
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I love this poem. It's wonderful and beautiful and fantastic and stuff. If I were you I would change the title to have the I be capitalized because it's not good advertisement. I think it has something to do with this website. If it was published it would be fine.
I can say that this was a beautiful poem. I couldn't take my eyes off it, espesially the last 4 lines or so where extreamly good. I am a poet and a novelest, and i think this is true for poets.
The only thing i can spot is that they arn't really separated into stanzas. But other than that, i loved it!! GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!
Can I just say that I LOVE this? I myself am a poet, and I think this is a very good way to look at BEING a poet.
As for grammar, who cares! Grammar in poetry is stupid anyway :p - plus I didn't see anything substantial.
I LOVE THIS I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT - I'll certainly read more of your work in the future...
10/10