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by PixieStix

Published July 29, 2012

In Poems

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BreBre Review
BreBre wrote a review Review · Jun 14, 2013

One word describes anything. Which is why this is good. The word Deleted can mean almost anything. I agree with Lylas and Vampire. It's a real simply word. It's like your deleting almost anything. Good job.

--Bre

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elysian
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elysian wrote a review Review · Jan 8, 2013

I liked and I agree with Vampy. it does seem like your deleting someone from your memory. like your deleting his number and finally moving on. you just had to put it on paper to remember that feeling of moving on, stepping forward, and forgetting. I liked a lot and I also need points but this is such a good poem and I really meant everything I said.

~Lylas

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VampireSenshi
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VampireSenshi wrote a review Review · Sep 28, 2012

I love this!

It's so simple!

One word, with so much emotion!

What does it mean? I guess it's in the eyes of the reader. To me it reminds me of when you're trying to get over someone, and you finally delete them from your memory and you can finally move on. I know the feeling, so it's got a deep personal connection.


- to be honest I really just needed the points for this review so I could post a work...

Please don't hate me <3

~Andrew

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Arryn Comment
Arryn commented Comment · Jul 30, 2012

I love it.



I am always saying "Glad to've met you" to somebody I'm not at all glad I met. If you want to stay alive, you have to say that stuff, though.
— Holden Caulfield