Torpid

Removed. If you looked over it for me, I thank you.

The bard leaned in over the table, eager for the tale, everseeking stories of adventure for his retelling. The elder gnome patiently sipped his mead, playing off the excitement of ...

The sun crept over the forested green landscape, illuminating the few dark, damaged buildings nestled there between two steep grassy hills. An eerie silence had settled over the small trade ...

This is an angle from the other characters story. Banzai, Thavyr, and a few others will meet. Banzai Shimoto, the infamous assassin, made his way silently down the old cobblestone ...

Guess what! This was also removed. And again, if you critiqued it, I thank you.

Removed. I thank all those who critiqued it.

Removed. I thank those who critique it.

Ok, i have rewrotten this whole 3rd section (if anybody even remembers the first two)so if u like it tell me and i might continue the story. Also, i dont ...

They watched the shadowy figure as he slowly trotted his horse away form the town gates. They were hungry and overly eager to feast upon man flesh. The two grotesque ...

Really just a little bored, time killing practice write. Boto carefully slid down the thick rope, landing withought any audible sound on the padded floor of the practice room. The ...

The aged and old man sat there, gazing out over the forested green hills before him, sighing deeply. The wind carried a slight chill so he hugged his weathered leather ...

I need ideas for this story i did a while ago called Atlantean, its about some guys, on the ocean floor, etc. It didn't really get a lot of replies ...

As the old man sat there, his eyes widened as it all came back to him. Christopher Erin McDermot lay on his stomach, a pillow under his crossed arms proppped ...

Well, i got the idea of a random fight scene from Phoenix and now im gunna try out my own, even though there are tons of other stuff i should ...

this poem was writtin when my frien was like nine and now hes twelve. the numbers on my computer quite working and they took most of the punctuation keys with ...

Prologue They called him The Elder. Because he was the oldest resident Victorious Gardens Veteran Center had ever seen. Every morning the weathered old man gingerly crept outside the facility ...

Sergeant Aerne was nothing more than a shrub on the landscape, he was a tan-green spec on a forty kilometer hunting ground. To the organic eye, he was invisible, and ...

Aerne Core eased his ship down onto the Coruscanti landing platform, deep down into the planet where sunlight sometimes did not reach and the buildings seemed to be cloaked in ...

Aerne smiled as his turbolift shot up into Upper Coruscant. The metallic world almost seemed heavenly draped in the morning light, but its beauty felt foreign to the soldier, whos ...

The two men walked a little ways, sitting down at one of the empty tables already cleaned by a droid. "How have you been? Where have you been? Youv'e disappeared ...

Wilhelm maneuvered through the crowd careful not to touch or be touched. He cupped a hand over his mouth and nose, trying to ignore the stench of the streets. Then ...