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Re: When it’s all done
Heya~ I’m down for more LJ, so here goes! Ohh I like that you point out he doesn’t have a heart in that way! Tho maybe you could have adapted ...
Jun 21 -
Re: Muerte-Alice and the aliens
And one more review for today ^^ I think I will read the other story tmr tho! Hm I feel like the first paragraph doesn’t really tell us what the ...
Jun 20 -
Re: The money gift
Hia! I recently read the previous snippet so let’s head straight into this one! Hmm I feel like since you had the info that Ruth and he got married in ...
Jun 20 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 18
Well once I have finished reading this you really do need to finish Loosely Lawful with LMS, huh? XD Whoever said that deserves a raise after that Sera-shaming! “All lawyers ...
Jun 20 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 17
Alright with what kind of dizzing location change are you gonna follow up the sheer excellence of last chapter? Ah okay, we are at least still on the shopping trip. ...
Jun 20 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 16
Had to go deal with stuff but now I am back for more! Ah we have arrived at wizard Walmart, right? I am so here for this XD Tho I ...
Jun 20 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 15
Hmmm I guess I keep wondering why Avon was like “let’s go to the mountain again” but now they are doing anything but and Avon never had a moment to ...
Jun 20 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 14
Had to chuckle immediately at this: “but Sera liked to imagine they were just sort of gone.” Not really a fan of the next sentence tho; feels a bit too ...
Jun 20 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 13
Goood morning!!! It is time. I have a chill weekend I am so here for more Loosely Lawful~ Stellar first sentence, immediately! I do like that they are having a ...
Jun 20 -
Re: In the Event of Discovery | Chapter One
Hia chi :) I’m curious what kind of novel you would write so, let’s go ^^ Alrighty, I love the sense-memory you describe. That’s so vivid (basically everything abt this ...
Jun 20 -
Re: freezing point - chapter 1
Good morning Nori! I saw you post this yesterday but I was too tired for the proper headspace so let’s do this now :3 Hehehehe “even less of it one ...
Jun 19 -
Re: Shadow (Chapter 4: The Message)
Good morning! Came to read the next chapter too, so let’s go ^^ I do like how we are immediately following up on what happened last chapter and I do ...
Jun 18 -
Re: How I Made My Millions
Good morning ^^ Great job reviewing! I like stories so let’s see what you have in store :3 “while the sky drained itself “ is such a good description! I ...
Jun 17 -
Re: Ilna - Prologue
Good morning ^^ Saw you doing a lot of reviews and decided to check in on your story :3 Oh the first paragraph has something very lyrical about it. Feels ...
Jun 17 -
Re: In the strangeness of the cave
Gooood morning! I have come for this folder today~ What a start too! Love the dialogue here :3 I also like this a lot: “Faintly, his snake tail had phantom ...
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