Tikaya

Good morning!! I do like the questions she asks herself in the beginning… tho I feel “How could she have let herself be absorbed in this book?” comes in a ...

Yay, more Witch’s Wonder!~ Love the first sentence. I like how you show WHERE he is and also what his current problem is :3 But then, I feel like the ...

Let’s look at this one next~ Wellll either she can’t feel it and therefore doesn’t notice the hurt or she does feel it but ignores the pain, right? Here: even ...

Good afternoon, creeper! Is Paige capable of going through walls? That’s what I think off when I read “she sunk into her parent’s room”; that she was in the room ...

And good… noon? Midday? Here for the second part, in any case! Hmm we get Shadow reading Jarid’s thought but no internal commentary for what this means to Shadow. Tragic. ...

Good morning! It took a while but your story finally came up in the Green Room sweep 😊 (And look at the progress in the Green Room!!) Last time, Shadow ...

Good afternoon 😉 Let’s read some more of the Aliens story :3 Maybe, in the first paragraph summary, you could have specified why the café was so special for your ...

Ohhh what a cover image!! Hia, Tikaya here with the right headspace for more Nine :3 Well tbh nothing ever can really put me in the right headspace for Zero ...

Hia how’s it going? 😊 I distinctly remember another poem about the louvre, now that you mention it… I really like the image of the metal ribcage, especially in conjunction ...

Hia! Oh man ☹ Is the narrator here based on yourself? I already find it sad that not only is the narrator “given” away but they also end up in ...

Good morning creeper! I wish we would get a quick info on why it is unusual that the parents invite each other? ….innnteresting that Nicole, the guest, can just go ...

Good afternoon creeper 😊 Ohh Siren’s desire now, let’s goo! Hmm if you write “none other that Moon’s Beach” I kinda expected the next sentence to be abt what is ...

Good afternoon! Okay I do love how the beginning of the poem already reflects how unusual this perspective is. I am especially curious why the last verse of the first ...

Good afternoon! Love the pictures you added to your poem :3 I also like how consistent you are in the language you’ve used! And that drop after “and I -- ...

Hia creeper! I think I remember what Love in Decaying Hearts is all about so let’s head right in :3 I think the first paragraph is a bit too overloaded ...