Thriver

Hey. Welcome to YWS! This is one superb poem. Love the way you have written it based on a tree's perspective. That was awesome. Found a number of mistakes. Let ...

Welcome to YWS! Thriver here to review. Great start, though I have to say I got confused at the end. I found quite a number of mistakes, but I'll highlight ...

Hello! Thriver here for a review. Nice poem. Simple, easy to understand. Just the way I like it. Nice story. Though I'd like to highlight some of the wrongs I ...

Magnificent!Superb! I love this poem! Tricky topic, a topic that deals with something that affects each and every one of us. You just did an awesome job to bring that ...

Hey! Thriver here to review until chapter 2. I'll start off from the beginning. Nice prologue. Love it, though the four paragraphs in the prologue are unnecessary. Few readers read ...

Hello! Thriver here to review. It's a nice story, though I have to say I found it pretty weird to name the guy Jed pretty quick, considering it was a ...

Hmmm....now this is one interesting poem. Love it! It's full of imagery and they all make sense. That is great! It's about the persona's flow of life, both easy and ...

Haha. Call it horror but I had to laugh at the end. It was so unexpected. Loved it! Pretty short story, but awesome. I see nothing to correct, though I ...

Haha! Superb story there! That was pretty creative. Day and Night. Your choice of using them like characters was awesome! Love the structure, though I got a little bit confused. ...

Hi! I have to say I love the message in it. Every story has a happy ending, but what if they were altered? Totally loved it, really. There's something in ...

Hi. Superb work! I was first impressed by its structure. I believe there was more to interpret from the structure. I had to love it! Good job there! I totally ...

Hello! Great poem! Heartless... superb! Though I got a little bit confused in the first stanza. I'd prefer if you just divide each line, something like... "As I held out ...

Hello! Breaking free from school... sweet feeling it gives. From the usual downs of life in school that we pretty much suffer one time or another. Totally loved the part ...

Hello there! Great work, great essay, great message! About humanity. The ending has got me thinking. Loved it. Great work with your spelling and punctuation. Honestly speaking, I see no ...

Hello! Horror story it was, and I loved it. Pretty much loved how you used suspense all over. Loved especially the visionary part, how he somehow saw what was to ...