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Re: destination f*cked
Legacy here for a review. Your title is what attracted me; quite a humorous title. I loved it. I also love the content, it's a comparison that I haven't ever ...
May 23, 2017 -
Re: Why write?
Legacy here for a review. I noticed that you don't have any stanza breaks. I recommend adding stanza breaks whenever you change the topic slightly. I like the content; it's ...
May 22, 2017 -
Re: Words
Legacy here for a review. I like the metaphor about how the words slash through your dreams. I think you could add more imagery about how the words slash you ...
May 20, 2017 -
Re: Flesh wounds or the girl who wouldn't die
Legacy here for a review. I love the content of this poem. You display the content in such a way where someone cannot deny it. You use stanza breaks excellently. ...
May 19, 2017 -
Re: soul catcher
Legacy here for a review. I like how you compared death to a soul catcher and did not paint him as a negative or a positive entity. But I did ...
May 19, 2017 -
Re: glitter used to stick to my skin
Legacy here for a review. You use imagery in this piece to your benefit. I wish you would have used stanza breaks though for it to be read easier. I ...
May 19, 2017 -
Re: Is that Music (Blackout Poem 2)
Legacy here for a review. I love the content and the idea that you weren't completely able to choose your words. You were able to work with what you had ...
May 19, 2017 -
Re: Finder of my depths
Legacy here for a review. I love the concept you have here. It's short and sweet. It also has so much meaning. It's nice how you were able to put ...
May 19, 2017 -
Re: The Protector
Legacy here for a review. I like the concept of this poem, describing a girl in such a way. It seems like the narrator is in love with the girl ...
May 19, 2017 -
Re: Under My Cloak Of Darkness *Rewritten*
Legacy here for a review. I love the imagery you use in this poem. I can see the scene happening as I read this. It is very well written. You ...
May 19, 2017 -
Re: Two Kittens
Legacy here for a review. I like this. It's cute and simple like kittens. You have a great use of imagery without needing to use many words at all. That ...
May 19, 2017 -
Re: Searching For A friend.
Legacy here for a review. It was difficult to read this poem because of the fact you have no stanza breaks (which can be a stylistic choice, but keep in ...
May 19, 2017 -
Re: madhouse of carousels
Legacy here for a review. I love the concept of this poem and they way that you have presented it. You barely have any punctuation (which can be a stylistic ...
May 19, 2017 -
Re: Lilac
Legacy here for a review. I like the content of the story, even though I dislike lilacs (blame my mom for that one). Anyways, I've never seen the content displayed ...
May 17, 2017 -
Re: Eight Million (Blackout Poem 1)
Legacy here for a review. I like the content of your poem and the way that you created it. I personally haven't seen many like this. Your stanza's aren't the ...
May 16, 2017
