TakeThatYouFiend

This is a good story, with a nice Shakespearean background. Even the title is simple and to the point, making it seem Shakespearean. It was a perfect length, any longer ...

Well done! I must say you have done well, especially seeing as this is your first poem. This poem's main strength is in it's rhythm. It is steady and consistent, ...

The description is inaccurate! :-) This is Take That You Fiend reviewing Fire, on air in 5 4 3 2 1 I feel that you have written a good poem ...

First I would like to review the message behind the essay. I wholly agree with the statment that life isn't fair. That is to say, people do not have equal ...

This is a very nice poem, with a reasonably good rhythm. The rhythm is aided by the phrasing of the syllables, and by the length od the lines. Your main ...

Despite the fact that this would appear to be nonsensical, and indeed each sentence, taken by itself, would be definitely so, together and in hindsight it all starts to make ...

Hi Converse Fire Girl, the King to review. I love the fact you have taken the time and effort to write with rhymme and rhythm. This is the attention to ...

This wittering nothing feels like a cross between modern art and sentences written by someone who has read Edward De Bono to the point of distraction. It certanly contains much ...

This song is really touching, and the main features that give it this feel are cleverly repeated in the chorus. This song untaps a feeling best summed up with the ...

Hello! This will certainly get likes, because all the authors on this site are sure to have had somthing like this experience. I am lazy, so I will use bulletpoints. ...

I rarely come across protest poetry! This is really somthing different, and not at all what I was expecting. I love your intricate metapors and similies, and the way that ...

This is a beautiful poem, and the line breaks are perfect, just where they should be, giving the poem gentle rhythm. Also the plot line works well. The only criticism ...

Have you seen The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly? This slightly reminds me of the final scene, a trio of cowboys, all faced with the fact if they shoot ...

I imagined this as a device, a figment of the imagination all the way through, and when you said it was you all along, right at the end, I felt ...

This, to me, has a double meaning. On the first read through I thought od it as dreams, in the sense of sleeping. In this sense I really related to ...