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This is nice, but I think you could hoover up a few mistakes. Firstly I think this is slightly too long, and you could profitably combine or delete some of ...

This piece is rather unique, and amazing metaphor for an idea, and it reads well. With so many rhymes I am quite surprised that so many of them seem totally ...

I read this five times, puzzled over it, pondered, thought so hard I stroked my chin to a point. It would help if you said it was a puzzle ib ...

Helloooooo! What I really liked about this poem was that, from the title to the penultimate line, the reader isn't onehundred percent sure what threehundredandsixtyfour (hooray compound word!) means.

This is a very nice chant, however I think it has been mis-categorized. These seem more like lyrics to me, but this is just an opinion. The repetition works well, ...

Woohoo! I simply love dream-poems, because they really allow the writer to explore areas of their creativity that other poems (especially love) don't allow them to do. Firstly I shall ...

Firstly a word on the title. Now I don't know if this is deliberate, but the title has a rather clever double meaning. At first I took it to mean ...

This is a purely a random poem, after reading and re-reading the poem, I am unable to find anything that even remotely resembles a deeper inner meaning. I suppose it ...

This is one of those awesome shapey poem thingys, cause it looks like a birdbath and it's about a birdbath and AWESOME! A little more review like, I think this ...

Hello! This really is a very nice poem, mainly because of the extended metaphor of butterflies and freedom. This symbolizes the situation well for me, and reminds me of such ...

This really is rather beautiful, and the dedication at the beginning is really nice. I think what I liked most was the phrasing, it was almost song-like, and very melodious. ...

This is nice poem, and at first I thought it was too short, but I see now that you have filled every line with meaning, which ment I read it ...

This is a very nice poem, just stuffed with gental strangeness. I see you have used very little punctuation, which adds to the irregularity of the piece, however I feel ...

This was absolutely awsome. The title is of course a big draw-in, and the fact that it isn't a love poem makes it an instant success! But you have exceeded ...

Hello, the hat man here to review. First of I would like to say I LOVE HATS. For details as to my hat collection se Pompadour's wall. My latest poem ...