TakeThatYouFiend

Thisn is a very nice work, in structure and in verse. - I was rather shocked with the poetic device of using no capitals, and it almost put me of ...

This is a very lovely poem, and I must say what an amazing avatar! -I was impressed with the method of writing the poem in a paragraph form, it does ...

liffhanger of the century, almost as good as part three to "Death to the Daleks. "! You have some very good adjectives (good not being one of them), however I ...

This is a very nice poem, and it is easy to relate to, minus inhaler, but I must say, if this is true, EMBRACE YOUR INNER NERD! Nerd is a ...

Wow! This is totally and stupendously beuatiful! I simply cannot fault this, and, as a Christian, this inspired! Because I am a lazy reviewer, i shall bullet point... -I loved ...

I'm guessing you are in team red. My name is Take That You Fiend, and it is your lucky day, because I will promply review three of your works, assuming ...

I don't like individual haikus, but this collection is really something! I like the lack of punctuation, because it brings out the meaning of the individual words and sentences. In ...

This was really nice, and I liked the humour of the piece. The rhyming is superb, not only are there no rhymes in particular that seem forced, but the lines, ...

This is very deep... just kidding, it isn't. This is a very nice poem, and I really like the first few descriptive words. I would question the "salty taste" you ...

Clever title there! This poem is very good in both rhythm, pace, and rhyming and in message, and both are benifited by the seperation into two parts. The last line ...

This is absolutely wonderful! This is very MOOMIN, (a high honour indeed) and truly in part reminds me a little of the hunting of the snark by Lewis Carroll. I ...

I find this to be rather deep, whether you intended it or not. One of the literary devices you have used is the simple language, used to reflect the everyday ...

This is a very nice poem, and I am reviewing it from a Christian point of view. You have seperated your work into little chunks, each with a rhyming couplet. ...

This is very nice, Girlofconversefirefullness, and I like the uncertain ending, a lovely personification of gravity. I particularly liked the lines Smelling the fresh roses, the moist damp soil, and ...

I liked this poem, not merely because it reminds me of my favorite song, but because it has good rhythm. The steady 1212 rhyme system and the uniform verses almost ...