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Re: Hope, Fill Dark Places - Chapter 1.1
Hey Ruby! Sorry for the late review. So overall I enjoyed this chapter, it further adds to the setting. I wouldn't say its quite as atmospheric as the prologue, but ...
Jul 7, 2017 -
Re: Immortal Tear
Good afternoon, Temujin :) I was looking through works from a few days ago and found this. I could've sworn I had left a review, so I'll make so I ...
Jul 3, 2017 -
Re: Hope, Fill Dark Places - Prologue
Heya RubyRed! Here with a review in response to your request :D So to start things off I really enjoyed your first use of "hell." It immediately sets the tone ...
Jul 3, 2017 -
Re: Grape Expectations
Hi beccalicious94! Tom here with a late night review for ya :D I really enjoyed this as the humorous poem it was intended to be! I'm a sucker for deeply ...
Jul 1, 2017 -
Re: Lovelorn
Hey Aleta! I really enjoyed this poem of yours. I connected to it on a very personal level. I know you as the author might have a different meaning behind ...
Jul 1, 2017 -
Re: mom, make it bettr
Hey all! I love the style you used with this poem. From what I can tell its a screenshot of just a raw Word Document or Pages? Even if I'm ...
Jul 1, 2017 -
Re: The melancholy of the triumph of the fall...
Hey there itsfranksnappa! I'm Tom, welcome to YWS! I only have one piece uploaded here on YWS so far, and it too is a four lined short poem :) That ...
Jul 1, 2017 -
Re: Yellow, Unforgettable
Hey there, midnightdreary! And welcome to YWS! I'm Tom, and I'm pretty new as well. Glad to see you on the sight :) Let me start by saying I don't ...
Jul 1, 2017 -
Re: Argument
Hey, great to see another work of yours so soon! :) So between this and your poem about Love (I just reviewed it but forget the title! I'm sorry :(), ...
Jul 1, 2017 -
Re: Love
Hey there! Tom here. As a whole, I really enjoyed your poem here. It does a great job of discussing what love is. It's ups and downs, how some days ...
Jul 1, 2017 -
Re: Tomorrow
Hey there summer! Tom again! Glad to see a new work of yours already :D This is another short piece, but I think again it is well done. My only ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: The Ocean
Hey there Sumerj12! I'm also new here, so welcome to YWS! Feel free to call me Tom. And thanks for the follow, I returned the favor :) While this poem ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: Mabel's Gardens
Hey Lumos! I'm Tom. I'll be leaving a review for this wonderful piece today :) Let me start by saying this was an amazing read, and I cannot emphasize that ...
Jun 28, 2017 -
Re: Love And Hate (Edit)
Hey there Thisislegacy! Tom here, I'll be leaving you a review. I'll be leaving a short review mostly sticking to the guidelines of your author's note as requested. In terms ...
Jun 27, 2017 -
Re: Cowgirl in the East
Heya, Master_Yoda! I'm Tom, I'll be leaving you a review today. I know the others have pointed this out, but I'm gonna start with the first line of the poem. ...
Jun 27, 2017