Storybraniac

Hi here! First off I would like to commend you on an amazing work that truly grasps at the reader's heartstrings. We can feel the intimacy these two individuals share ...

Hello! This is a very beautiful piece detailing the intimate friendship of two very close people. The old English was distracting at times, but I felt it gave the open ...

Hi! Welcome to yws! First off very brave of you to share such a personal piece as your first work. Literature really comes alive when it comes from within one's ...

A clichéd but touching piece nevertheless. I felt the beginning was a little too strerched out though, like it kept the reader from eventually reaching the climax at the end. ...

Herro. This is a pleasant piece of satire. Its not meant to be taken seriously obviously but still has a charming essence to it. Few nitpicks. Im not sure if ...

I'll be honest i teared up a little. That was beautiful. Felt some lana del rey vibes. I really enjoyed the guitar riff in the intro and the part before ...

In my opinion, I believe arranged marriage is a disgrace to all of humanity. I come from a super conservative family, who care more of religion than actual feelings. Being ...

Heya! Sorry ive been busy with school. Im really happy to see your chapters appear in the literary spotlighf. You desrve it. Onto the chapter. Wow. Things took a turn. ...

It's been a while since I've read a novel. But I'm definitely glad I read this one. There's something in it's simplicity that just draws me in. I reay like ...

Stor here! This is a really interesting piece. In a good way. I'm really into poetry that follows a different format of what you would usually expect from a poem. ...

I remember in literature class, we were often asked to link poetry with art, sometimes we would link poems to famous arts by other painters or draw our own. This ...

Woah. The last line with 'you' in it really gave me chills. I like that you make it seem as if you're addressing someone else, until ythe last 'you' suggests ...

Hi again! I just realized after reading your other work that this is your first work. And I must say. I'm amazed. This is some next level stuff. Befor anything ...

Hi there! Welcome to yws! I really like this piece. Short but super effective. That fact that you didn't capitalize or properly punctuate the poem gives it a weird mysterious ...

Hi! Welcome to yws! Hope you're enjoying your time here so far. Ok. This is your first. I'm really impressed. I've always felt connected to deep poems with no context. ...