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I love this. It's very understated, but it's quite flattering in its presentation. The character has a quiet, subtle voice that almost sounds humble and quaint. I liked Maggie, even ...

I like this, and I have to say that I liked it more and more as the poem progressed. The writing is very natural, but it also has a subtle ...

Hi, welcome to YWS! And now, to tear your story apart a bit, if that's alright. Keep in mind that I am really, really picky about romantic pieces. If they ...

Hi, and welcome to YWS!!! :D Here to review. I like this; it's very simple, but almost in an innocent way. It works well with the concept of a breakable ...

I like this; it's so harsh and cathartic. Only you could make something so gritty and raw sound so usual, I'm impressed/envious/amazed. While it's considerably short, I don't think that ...

Meh...if I'm to be frank, I'm a little surprised that this has been featured. That's not to say that this is a bad poem, but it certainly isn't anything new. ...

This is sweet. It's pretty simple and the concept is nothing new, but I quite like it all the same. The rhythm and flow of this throughout is quite steady ...

Ezekiel Johnson was like any other farmer in Willowcreek. In one word, he was struggling. It was the middle of summer, when his crops were always at their best, when ...

Hey, here to review! Keep in mind, first of all, that I'm a tough critic of romantic novels. They can develop into my favorite novels on rare occasions, but more ...

This is written very well. I'm not sure how I feel about the excess punctuation, but other than that, this is pretty swell. I particularly like: "Two feet away and ...

Okay, so this has potential, but it needs some cleaning up. You have a good concept of "What would we do with our lives if we knew they were all ...

This is very elaborate and creative and, well, pretty. If nothing else, it just creates a beautiful image of something that would otherwise be simple. My only problem with it ...

This was adorable! Reformat this and it'll be even better! Assuming that you didn't know how to format this, I'll ignore that and just focus on the poem itself. It's ...

Hey there Katz! Well, I would say that this needs a lot of work, but almost entirely in one area - it needs more...more-ness. This has promise, but you're rushing ...

Hey Persy! Lovely to see poetry from you again, as always. I like the first stanza a lot, but had a hard time liking the ending. It just felt a ...