Wow. I'm Pix, and this peice is just...terrific.
I love how you expressed emotions in here,and love how some of the words had an 'y' at the end of the lines to make it like- "Oh! She added a 'y'!"
I really love this. But, I didn't really like the way you started with a captial letter and then the next time was lowercase. It kind of confused me.
Other then that, it was amazing! Great job!
~Pixie
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