-
Re: Chapter 39: The Sacrifice
Hey, Artemis! Wolf here for a review. Well. You've succeeded. Again. Each of these chapters are fantastically gripping and I find myself trying to rush through (maybe even skipping parts, ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 38: The Revitalization
Hey, Artemis! Wolf here for a review! So you've succeeded in crushing my soul, and I really just want to curl up into a ball and cry, but I'm still ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 37: The Revelation
Hey, Artemis! Wolf here for a review. I'm going to cry. Oh my god, how could you. Cudos to you for creating an amazing plot twist and a fantastically gripping ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 36: The Counter-attack
Hey, Artemis! Wolf here for a review. Lodestone. Of course. I knew it would have to pop up again. It's too evil to just abandon. Then there's the elixir which ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 35: The Wait
Hey, Artemis! Wolf here for a review. So quick thing while I'm still reading, I'm a little confused when the girl with auburn hair runs off. Artemis yells something after ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 34: The Reaction
Hello, Artemis! Wolf here for a review. (Enjoying your review spam yet? :P) So, I feel like this part is a little lacking. I understand it's supposed to be urgent ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 33: The Discovery
Hey, Artemis! Wolf here for a review. No, no, no. Sedna! This is not a good idea! Nothing ever ends good when a previously evil character tries to take matters ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 32: Ursa Major
Hello, Artemis! Wolf here for a review. I love Arthur so much right now. Of course, I'm all for the romance, not just because it's adorable, but because it's just ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 31: The Return
Hey, Artemis! Wolf here to review. It appears I've made it to the green room! Score for me? I swear, you and Noelle have a knack for cliff hangers and ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 30: The Roof
Hey, Artemis! Wolf here for a review. Yes, I know. I say this every time, but your endings seem to be the best sections. Seriously, it was beautiful listening to ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 29: The Facility
Hello, Artemis! Wolf here for a review. Okay, this is an exception. I read Rosey's review, and I agree with her in saying that you should try to look for ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: chapter 28: The Arrow
Hello, Artemis! Wolf here for a review. Lucian D: No! For a second there I swore he was dead. And I wouldn't have been surprised if he was dead either. ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 27: The Capitol
Hello, Artemis! Wolf here for a review. So, whoever said you should just cut this chapter, I vote against that. If you believe that this should stay because it has ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 26: The Invitation
Hello, Artemis! Wolf here for a review. You're making this so much harder than it should be xD Of course this was a shorter part than the rest, but it ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 25: The Recovery
Hey, Artemis! Wolf here for a review. These are getting better and better! So, usually I'll making a comment or two while I'm reading, giving you my straight thoughts, but ...
Nov 30, 2014