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Re: A rolling mess(unfinished, first attempt at song writing)
Spartan here and I'm gonna be reviewing the song lyrics quickly. First off the this kinda feels like it'd be better flowing like a rap or maybe a slow country ...
Jan 27, 2019 -
Re: The Pine Tree
Hello this is Spartan here for a short review of your poem. This poem is honestly one of most confusing poems to me as it has no "flow" to it, ...
May 17, 2018 -
Re: Thick, black lungs
Thank you for making this poem, it truly speaks to my heart. I agree that people should stop smoking and I hope this poem reaches the eyes of many. The ...
Jan 23, 2018 -
Re: The Forest
Hi hi I am here for a quick moment and to say hi. HI. Anyways this is a review of your poem and in all aspects I like it. To ...
Jan 11, 2018 -
Re: 'Cause You are a Rainbow
Hi hi dropping by with something for you hope you enjoy. This is a sweet little poem and it also helps brighten up others day if they read it. I ...
Jan 11, 2018 -
Re: Oops
So is this really a piece of work or just something to post cause if it's a something to post this is easy points for someone. I am taking full ...
Jan 11, 2018 -
Re: Entrance Essay
This is Spartan 118 here for a review and to give pointers on the rough draft essay you have here so please bare with me as I am not an ...
Jul 16, 2017 -
Re: Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 2.1
Hey this is Spartan 118 here for a quick review. So I'm gonna blunt and say this is kinda boring and has no plot what so ever from the beginning ...
Jul 5, 2017 -
Re: Within my blood (Epilogue)
Hey Spartan 118 here for a quick review and it may not be that good just bare with me, please. 1. I liked that its ending tho it seems kinda ...
Jul 5, 2017 -
Re: Deleted
Hey this is Spartan 118 here giving you an amazing review so bare with me and just let me review. So I like that this poem is about a girl ...
Jul 5, 2017 -
Re: acceptance
Hey there this is Spartan 118 with a quick short review for you. To start I see you use a repetitive word a lot throughout this poem and that's fine ...
Apr 3, 2017 -
Re: The Lion and The Wolf
Hi this is spartan 118 here for a quick review and to make your day a lil better, so kick back and relax. First off this poem seems like it's ...
Mar 28, 2017 -
Re: i. water
Hey this is spartan118 here for amazing review so sit back grab your drink and plate of snacks and enjoy. So it seems to me that you are trying to ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Whats in your way?
hey this is spartan 118 here for an amazing short review so bear with me and enjoy the review. So honestly this is a great poem about the last and ...
Feb 21, 2017 -
Re: Smaugs Lovely poem ps i srink at poem's :(
Hi this is Spartan one one eight here for an amazing review hope you love it and read it. First off there are a few errors I see cause of ...
Feb 6, 2017
