Hello! this is my lovely poetry i call it, i stink at poetry.
dog,
cat,
frog,
fish,
oh my god,
how i wish,
i was good,
at poetry.
Look over their!
i see a log,
i think i will now sit on the log,
Oh my god,
this log is so soft,
softest log in the world,
speaking of world,
the world is fun,
i love to run in the sun,
the sun is hot,
if you look at it,
you will go blind,
oh sun,
you blow my eyes,
and my mind!
hahaha thanks for reading this and i hope you like reading me STUPIDITY: D
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OH MY CORNDOGS!! This was incredibly hilarious!!!
I loved this whimsical piece. Thank you for posting!!
OH MY CORNDOGS!! This was incredibly hilarious!!!
I loved this whimsical piece. Thank you for posting!!
hahaha, thank you so much!
Hey, this is hilarious and made me smile!
First the boring stuff Grammatical Etc. errors:
This should be there . Just a simple mistake and one I make too.
Another simple sleeping mistake get rid of the E for sit
This isn't really a mistake, but I think you really should just write out Oh my god instead here.
Typos are so easy to make am I right? Anyway, you are missing the L world.
Anyway as this isn't really as much of a real poem as it is just making fun of poetry I can't really say it has much of meaning or anything to criticize like most poetry, but for its purpose it is really great at just being funny.
Only advise I have for you is just double check for those typos in the future.
Sláinte -Junel
Thank you!!
PS was not trying to make fun of poems.
Hi this is Spartan one one eight here for an amazing review hope you love it and read it.
First off there are a few errors I see cause of spelling yet I get the feeling you be better off writing a short story and not a poem personally I think that but it's up to you. You are gonna have to work on your writing poems but you have a good start here and keep trying cause we all need to keep getting better. Um second is I saw a few punctuation errors and I do the same thing so me really getting into your back about it is really not my problem so yea. Anyone I like how you ended it by saying "hahaha thanks for reading this and i hope you like reading me STUPIDITY: D" that's funny got to admit once I read that I had a little chuckle. I really hope you improve over time and keep making poems and plz do take my recommendation for a short story seriously I would love to read a short story you made.
Well this is Spartan one one eight signing out hope you enjoyed my review. I hope you have a wonderful day, evening, morning, or night.
Thank you for the help! Ps I was never trying to make fun of poetry jsyn