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Re: Half A Sandwich
Hey Hey! How are you? Ready for a review? So when I read the description I thought this would be a weird game shows about sandwiches....Wow I was wrong. You ...
Dec 11, 2016 -
Re: MINTER - Zero (Before Editing)
Hey hey! How are you? Ready for a review? This is the definition of Winter Wonderland. As I read I could hear the snow, the slow wind, I could see ...
Dec 11, 2016 -
Re: The Bomb
Hey Hey! How are you? Ready for a review? First of all, I really like this! The suspense is there, and it is obviously a mystery series. Now onto some ...
Dec 10, 2016 -
Re: No Name (For now)
Hey Hey! How are you? Ready for a review? You take short story very literal don't you? Sorry. The length doesn't matter, but this should definitely GIVE me more. The ...
Dec 9, 2016 -
Re: Dear John: You do NOT Define Me
Hi, I'm Lau. This is beautiful, strong and deep. I'm sorry for what happened to you but I am so glad you could get here, to tell us and to ...
Dec 9, 2016 -
Re: I Love You, Grandpa
Hey Hey! How are you? Ready for a review? So first of all: Goosebumps. yep I had them. Be proud! Second of all, even though I can't personally relate to ...
Dec 9, 2016 -
Re: The importance of extracurricular activities
Hey Hey! How are you? Ready for a review! Now, first of all I agree with everything here, which is amazing because I am quite opinionated. Well, everything here just ...
Dec 9, 2016 -
Re: Villain's World Chapter 1
Hey Hey Night! How are you? Ready for a review? ohhhhh I like this! I like this a lot. The second I saw the tittle I was like "YEPPP, that's ...
Dec 9, 2016 -
Re: Escape
Hey Hey! How are you? Ready for a review? So, my interpretation of this poem, which if I don't read I'll get 9 years of bad luck, apparently, is that ...
Dec 9, 2016 -
Re: Iceberg
Hey Hey! Welcome to YWS!!! If you have any questions, just ask, me or anyone! For a first poem written here, absolutely gorgeous! "Most only see the smallest tip That's ...
Dec 8, 2016 -
Re: To the stars
Hey Hey, How are you? Ready for a review? I usually don't review romances so bare with me. (I'm a bit of a pessimist when it comes to love. SORRY) ...
Dec 8, 2016 -
Re: I'd Only Wanted A Tissue
Hey Hey! How are you? Ready for a review? Overall thoughts: This is great. You can feel the anguish in his/her voice and I am eager to know what happened. ...
Dec 8, 2016 -
Re: Names then Numbers
Hey Hey Burrow, again! Let's get started, shall we? All in all, this is original. I like the idea and I've never seen anything like it. Some questions: "“I look ...
Dec 8, 2016 -
Re: Breathe in and breathe out
Hey Hey, How are you? Ready for a review? Oh la la! I like this a lot! A love poem which is only shown to be one on the last ...
Dec 8, 2016 -
Re: Drawing With Silver
hey hey How are you? Like seriously, how are you? (if you ever want to talk I am here) Now to the poem: BRAVO! "I draw with silver but it ...
Dec 6, 2016