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Hi! A quick suggestion... if my journey on this path leads to losing you, then this path is not my path; What if you delete these lines? When you're making ...

Hiiii. In all her bent-up, obnoxious glory. This really isn't very descriptive. How are you glorious? All these adjectives that you are throwing out tell you vaguely what is happening, ...

Awwww, I like this poem! It uses lots of onomatopoeia and is highly relatable for anyone who wants to get another couple minutes. I also like the rule of three ...

Hi! Okay, I know this wasn't a serious work and you probably don't care about any comments for this. You were probably just testing out the site, haha. HOWEVER. I ...

Hi! Ooooh, I actually like the ambiguity of the poem, lol. There is definitely a sense of pain in this poem... like there's a call of suffering which I like. ...

Hi! Let's just straight to review, shall we? (Just like your story goes straight to the conflict, yay!) Teresa walked through the carnival, the sense of unease clutching at her ...

Awwww, I like all the astronomical references! You start with the moon and then go off to the stars and sun and galaxies... it's quite cosmic in scope, and I ...

Awww, this is sweet! I love the gentleness of the father and the kid and their relationship. I think it's fantastic that this is in California (I grew up in ...

Hi Hijinks! Just a couple of things... the air smells like snow and tingles like snow but the ground is still uncovered I cannot express how much I love that ...

Hi! This story feels like it's missing a lot... like, it almost feels like a teaser that exists to tease a bigger story. Reading this, I feel like I have ...

Just a quuuuuuuuuuick review, because you said something about not being sure about romances so you might want a little help, maybe??? Anyway, my review is about this part: Love. ...

Hi alliyah! First of all, this animation really looks cool. It adds something really nice because it uses the imagery of the moon and the sun to complement the poem. ...

Okay, so this is just going to be a quick review, but, as a mother, I was absolutely horrified that Elsa didn't pay 1000000% attention to Princess Ashhgleigh Reighven Shadow ...

Oh, what a fun story! It reminded me of those James Bond spy thrillers, which I kind of adore. I think it's extra fun in that, instead of sticking with ...

Hiiiiiii! Okay, so this is now only six years old, lol. But I had to check it after you pointed it out. ^^ Anyway, this is also cool (and rough, ...