Skydreamer

Hmmm. Very interesting, deep thoughts. :) I must start with I liked how you matched the ending with the beginning. My first criticism would be that this is just way ...

When I review poems (especially when they are done in such format) I like to go from stanza to stanza, so here I go! First stanza: I really like it. ...

I don't really know why people have not read this, or why this is not featured, or why it's only gotten one real review or why not that many people ...

Hey! (Saw your link on the poetry club) So, you were writing it at night (well morning but, dark out)? Ah, does that have anything to do with your inspiration? ...

Hi! I would first like to say, that you are really cool and that this poem is amazing. So, I really liked how you arranged it into different scenes for ...

Hi! This is pretty interesting. Actually very interesting. And I think it was beautifully written for the most part. I actually don't know what LRA abduction is other than from ...

HI! You are my first, "back to YWS" review! :) So, I liked it. I find it quite interesting, but I do have some advice, that might just help your ...

This has real potential! *knocks* Hey, so, I love writing my poem-stories in this format, but I realized that the formats are for reading it. :/ sucks though, cause this ...

Hi, *knocks* :P So this is really short, and that's okay! It's fine, but with a poem so short you really want to make sure you get as much across ...

Wow... *knocks* :P I really, really like your first two sentences...I didn't get it at first but then I read it again and I was stunned. It touched me, I ...

Hey! :D *knocks* so... I really like this piece! It's really interesting, and it gets more interesting as you read it. The start was good. It was captivating in the ...

I like it! I like how you put a lesson and used the story to tell it. It kind of made you think it was going downhill but then you ...

Hiya! Not bad topic, it's actually pretty interesting in a way. But there are some mistakes... Quote: "He slid through the wall of wire using a sheet of tin foil ...

Hiya! The start of story was good, but it needs more of an introduction (how she met Harris) “Harris climbed the steps and Alice followed, only a slight twinge of ...

Hiya! So, the first two sentences were good, but I think that they would be even more captivating had they been separated. And perhaps even instead of: The mist drifted ...