ShakespeareWallah

Greetings, first of all the reference to Hindu cows seemed rugged and cool. a lot of people don't know that in Hinduism cows are sacred and so people are forbidden ...

Interesting! hello and I'm Puck ( a Bangladeshi, we tended to get away from Pakistan but it seems,on the basis of your piece, that you guys are still in trying ...

greetings!and wow really artistic thing you did here. the atmosphere you put in the piece is really beautiful and has this aura that lets you go further deep into it. ...

this is cool! it's reads like some kind of an intellectual rambling that normal people are supposed to lose sequence of. i really like the point that we never get ...

good day! okay, your poems really cute. this guy, the poet, is pouring his heart out and proclaiming his love for his girl and giving all the obvious romantic references, ...

wow! I'm not a fan of this wealthy-beautiful vampire craze but i really liked your piece. the vocabulary was good, the word choice very raw and at the same time ...

Ulaakut! ( that's probably 'hello' in Inuit, the Eskimo language) Puck here to review chapter one i think i really have to thank you for giving me the pleasure to ...

greetings! okay, the plot is mighty good. you're simple narration actually hooks people into reading more. first of all, there's a few technical and grammatical mistakes here which i think ...

Hello!! first of all, the title's a really common one. i saw loads of people use that title before in their works ( published and unpublished) so i was like ...

Greetings! it had good structure, good flow, good imagery. but i think at some points i have to agree with yuriko, it doesn't leave the reader anything. the repetitions work ...

greetings! you wrote about the classic situation of a girl finding out his man has got lipstick stains and figures he's cheating on her. have to say, really liked your ...

Good day! seriously, its really cute. And it made me go awwwwwww too. the longs lines really clashed well with the shorter ones giving the impression of crush stricken people ...

hello monkey scott! Likes: the story's ripe and good. you narrated it somewhat a matter of fact way, which i thought put a good tinge . at parts Dakota really ...

hello! first of all. really liked the simplicity of it. good rhythm. the poem had good sense both literally and metaphorically. "I'm like a rag, the water is my knowledge, ...

"Her feet move in accordance to the lethal dance, One foot touching the air, tempting to enhance- The air wraps her in a blanket of darker things, Arms stretch out ...