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Re: ''what we never said'' the final episode
This is beautiful, bro. As someone who grew up a man and still is one and who also had a father, i understand how tough having a good relationship with ...
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Re: hopeless romantic
One of those poems that just gets me. I fall too easily un love and obsess over people and this captures that feeling perfectly. That yearning that becomes self harm ...
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Re: Reflection
This is pretty heartbreaking. If I’m correct and I might not be, I interpreted this as the loss of innocence as you grow up, which may not be the actual ...
Sep 1 -
Re: Over That Hill
Very interesting poem executed pretty well. I think the main good thing about this prom is that it has the potential to reach many people with its relatability. It can ...
Sep 1 -
Re: fire flies
Truly hard to read and very upsetting, and yet it’s highly engaging. The big thing that makes it so engaging is the typography or the way the verses are structures. ...
Sep 1 -
Re: Dear Mother
And they say Shakespeare is dead, but this might prove the naysayers wrong because holy shit, this is phenomenal. It’s tragic, rhymes, and is just fantastic. I like how you ...
Sep 1 -
Re: A sad swan's song
I really liked this, it feels very transparent and personal, but also relatable. I think it transcends gender too, as a boy, I felt I could relate to the message ...
Sep 1 -
Re: Sheep Dogs (chapter 1)
I am extremely hooked. This first chapter like all great first chapters do, set the scene very well and introduced the characters to me very well. The dialogue feels natural ...
Sep 1 -
Re: First piece
This is a really solid first story. It’s undeniably a little rough around the edges, but still shows a great amount of promise. The subject matter and the way you ...
Sep 1 -
Re: My first poem - words cannot describe
Damn, I might need to diet because this is so sweet! If I was Evelyn, I’d be blushing right now. This is a beautiful poem, it captures that feeling of ...
Sep 1 -
Re: The incident
Just really charming at its core. A very funny sorry that beaming with wit and relatability. This feels like a story that everyone can relate to from one point or ...
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Re: my mind
Loved this! It really captures the feeling of vulnerability caused from one’s mind alone. The crushing thoughts, the self doubt, I love those being represent as monsters. It’s very creative ...
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Re: Scary Home
The best type of art is the art that draws from personal experiences, and I really feel this came from a place that was still raw from sadness. My heart ...
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Re: Back when the sky was bigger
The feeling this captures is lightning in a bottle. You do accurately captured the feeling of innocence that was present when everyone was a child. That carefree, liberating nature. It ...
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Re: It was my birthday
Simple yet beautiful. There is something that feels so profound about this, and personal. The feeling of loneliness is captured so painstakingly accurately, it hurts just to read. I really ...
Aug 30
