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Sebastian

  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: ''what we never said'' the final episode

    This is beautiful, bro. As someone who grew up a man and still is one and who also had a father, i understand how tough having a good relationship with ...

    Sep 1
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: hopeless romantic

    One of those poems that just gets me. I fall too easily un love and obsess over people and this captures that feeling perfectly. That yearning that becomes self harm ...

    Sep 1
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Reflection

    This is pretty heartbreaking. If I’m correct and I might not be, I interpreted this as the loss of innocence as you grow up, which may not be the actual ...

    Sep 1
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Over That Hill

    Very interesting poem executed pretty well. I think the main good thing about this prom is that it has the potential to reach many people with its relatability. It can ...

    Sep 1
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: fire flies

    Truly hard to read and very upsetting, and yet it’s highly engaging. The big thing that makes it so engaging is the typography or the way the verses are structures. ...

    Sep 1
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Dear Mother

    And they say Shakespeare is dead, but this might prove the naysayers wrong because holy shit, this is phenomenal. It’s tragic, rhymes, and is just fantastic. I like how you ...

    Sep 1
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: A sad swan's song

    I really liked this, it feels very transparent and personal, but also relatable. I think it transcends gender too, as a boy, I felt I could relate to the message ...

    Sep 1
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: Sheep Dogs (chapter 1)

    I am extremely hooked. This first chapter like all great first chapters do, set the scene very well and introduced the characters to me very well. The dialogue feels natural ...

    Sep 1
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: First piece

    This is a really solid first story. It’s undeniably a little rough around the edges, but still shows a great amount of promise. The subject matter and the way you ...

    Sep 1
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: My first poem - words cannot describe

    Damn, I might need to diet because this is so sweet! If I was Evelyn, I’d be blushing right now. This is a beautiful poem, it captures that feeling of ...

    Sep 1
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: The incident

    Just really charming at its core. A very funny sorry that beaming with wit and relatability. This feels like a story that everyone can relate to from one point or ...

    Aug 30
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: my mind

    Loved this! It really captures the feeling of vulnerability caused from one’s mind alone. The crushing thoughts, the self doubt, I love those being represent as monsters. It’s very creative ...

    Aug 30
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Scary Home

    The best type of art is the art that draws from personal experiences, and I really feel this came from a place that was still raw from sadness. My heart ...

    Aug 30
  • Lyrics » Other, General Re: Back when the sky was bigger

    The feeling this captures is lightning in a bottle. You do accurately captured the feeling of innocence that was present when everyone was a child. That carefree, liberating nature. It ...

    Aug 30
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: It was my birthday

    Simple yet beautiful. There is something that feels so profound about this, and personal. The feeling of loneliness is captured so painstakingly accurately, it hurts just to read. I really ...

    Aug 30


I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom