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Hello Deanie, Wonderwoman here to review your poem. I really thought that this was heart warming and I like how you made the old lady sound sweet and caring enough ...

Hello retrodisco666, Wonderwoman here to review your poem. I see you have written so many before this one and I thought this was very clever. Have you heard of standard ...

Hello Strange, Wonderwoman here again. I don't have much to say so, good job. :) I don't have a lot on criticizing but I would recommend capitalizing the first word ...

Hello Captain, Wonderwoman here! I like your poem I think it was cool.

Hello Wonderwoman here. I must say this was a very awesome chapter! I see this is your first posted work. Fabulous! Let me get down to business so I can ...

Hello Strange, Wonderwoman here to review your poem. I will go straight into business. 1st: I lost forty pounds today, by swallowing tape worms. It was oddly delicious. I don't ...

Hello SnazzyPencil, Wonderwoman is here to review your poem. I thought this was a very interesting poem. It made me think of what we see with our minds instead of ...

Hello, Nunya here! This poem is so sad :( . I think I can relate to this. My grandma might have this now that I think about it. I would ...

Hello Link! It's a me Nunya. I very much like this poem. I also think that this was very clever because not only did you make a rhythmic poem it ...

Hello AlmondEyes! I love this poem! I think it is very beautiful and nicely placed. I don't have any tips for you here. I thought it was very pretty. The ...

Hello WaltzingDreams, Nunya here for review time! I really don't have any nit picks here. I will say this maybe put some periods and commas at the beginning stanzas, so ...

Hello WaltzingDreams, Nunya here for review time! I really like your poem I write a lot myself. I think I have 26 anyway, we're not here to talk about me. ...

Hello wisegirl22, Nunya here for review time! I love this poem a lot but let's get down to business, shall we? First: this is a little bit confusing because your ...

Hi Eros, Nunya here for review time! I love your poem and I think you could get some more people to take a look at it if you put in ...

Hi Snazzy! Nice poem. I think it's very cute. Also I can relate to this poem! :D I don't really think I have anything to say as far as punctuation ...