RoseCrown

Hats Off! Its the best I've ever read :D And believe me your not alone on the true account part :( But that's life right we tend to forgive forget ...

This is just amazing! Hats off! :D You wrote it very well. I loved the rhythm and the lines are so mesmerizing. I love the words you used too. Even ...

Charmy Congo :D You did amazing in the poem and I can tell its from experience! :( I almost cried! ;( What you cant tell to any one in words ...

Heyyy charmy! This is RoseCrown reviewing your poem! Its your first poem so its pretty good! :D There are a few mistakes which are actually really silly! Their actually grammar ...

Hi I'm Lois and I'm here to review your poem. This is such a cute and lovely poem. I liked how you described the little kid! There was only 1 ...

It was an amazing poem Firstly! Secondly, I love the title! And to me I felt like I was in the poem like I was running in the woods and ...

Wow! This poem is really too good! The way you portrayed yourself and the killer is amazing. I also like the way at first you describe yourself as helpless in ...

Wow AMAZING! :D I love the style in which you wrote. :D In your 13th stanza I think it should be willingly. :P Even though it did not rhyme all ...

Not at all bad for your first poem. I liked it a lot. :D Just a suggestion next time try rhyming for this exact same poem and you will see ...

First of all I love the style in which you wrote! The story means a lot to me since I'm from India and I've seen tsunamis happen and How they ...

Wow it's really amazing I like it a lot I love the last stanza it's so true and I think everyone on planet earth would be able to relate to ...

This is just amazing. :D I love it and how u contrast night and day. Its really meaningful. I love the title even though I thought it would be a ...

Ohhh it's sad but really good. :( I feel like crying :( But you should take credit for yourself for making me cry :P I love the topic and about ...

This is poem is soo sad, but touching. I feel like crying. :( But i love the way u described your sadness. The title also is good. It could have ...

Hey itsLayal This is so relate-able to actually every human being on the planet. Its too good in fact it's the best :D I like the way u describe the ...