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Thanks! :D

Ooh snap. But yeah I agree. That probably could have been nicer. Don't take it personally. Late welcome to the site. :)

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actually, it's not a typo! It's spelled chaise longue. It's french. It means long couch or something. Thanks for your review!

Remember that time with the mint oreos? Ahaha I saved your life there. Lovely poem.

Much better. Last time it was hard for me to even grasp what was happening. Now it's very clear. The final stanza is striking me as a bit skoogy though. ...

What I always do for rhythm is pick out a rhythm before hand (or, if I have one phrase in particular that I know I want to include, I use ...

Mwhahaha You'll have to wait a little longer for the title. I hinted at it in this chapter but hehehe. Not yet. Call me ignorant Alright, you're ignorant. Click here ...

Quash is most definitely a word. It's a good one too. I like it a lot. I was procrastinating the actual climax with this chapter. That's why the paragraphs are ...

And I guess XII and XIII were based off of the original poem too-ish, but those I put there on purpose. I like yours, by the way. XD

Wow I never saw that poem of yours XD No, I did this for NaPo. I found Stevens' poem myself. xD I did kind of try to match the themes ...

Thank you for all these great reviews!! Sorry I couldn't respond to them, as I've been mostly using mobile to access YWS. Anyway, you touched on pretty much everything that ...

Wow I forgot there were still people who didn't know about Jay's traipse to earth! Thanks for the review!

(alpha was one of those people who took like three months with a long Dialogue with me to figure it out)

Thanks for the kind words. And um... no, none of those are the answer(s). You'd better invest yourself if you want to find the answer(s). The only people who have ...