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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: when passions turn to obsessions

    Sup, gruffin? I love your poetry about art. I find that I can relate to it a lot. I love the tenderness in this piece, and how hardened it gets ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: impression.

    Man, I don't think I have much to say, but I'm going to try to give you a quality review anyhow. I like the repeated sequences, but I'm sticking to ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Release II

    Hello! Obviously you like archery, hey? Me too. I thought this was a really nice poem. It captured the beauty of firing an arrow, and I actually think it was ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Historical Fiction Re: Tomorrow

    Hello! This was a pleasant poem, but in my opinion, it was lacking a lot. First of all, the forced rhyme made this bothersome to read. Not every poem needs ...

    May 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: of epitaphs and wilder suns

    Remember how I told you I loved this? I still do, but I hate to see it stuck in the green room for so long. Obviously I didn't get to ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Horror Re: Little girl

    Hello. This piece was shocking (in a bad way) and I very much did not like it. Your subject matter is obviously something that people don't generally say bluntly like ...

    May 5, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: cold feet + guests

    Looks like I'm on a Pompadour binge. XD Is totally not doing this just so she can escape the wrath of bunnies no, no. I really, really, REALLY like this ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Into the Setting Sun Part 2

    Hiya! So. You start off with a very specific image of riding off into the setting sun, and then your'e talking about this specific He for the rest of that ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: seanoughts & skyknits

    Hello again! Can I just say that I LOVE the title. It makes me really happy. The #2 confuses me. Is there a part one to this? Your first three ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: unlabelled swinging aortas

    Hello! I thought this was a really cool poem actually. And the simplicity of it makes me very happy. I think the big words, mostly those in the second stanzas ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Mother Earth

    Hello! I think there is a really good point behind this poem. However, I think it is obscured by forced rhyme and thesaurus words. First, let's talk rhyme. Rhyme is ...

    Apr 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Kingdom Beyond the Mountains

    Hello! I'm partial to these kinds of fantasy poems. They go really well in books, but by themselves, they usually lack a bit. I will review this as if it ...

    Apr 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Cuts

    Hey. I'm going to say right now that I'm really not a fan of the cutting poems. This poem specifically reminds me of another poem As you can see, they're ...

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Window

    Hello! There are a couple things that I think could be adjusted in this poem to make it better. ^^ The message is pretty poignant though. First off, your title ...

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fear

    Heyo I like the sentiments behind this poem a lot, and I think that the thing with the vibrant/duller colors really sums up what this poem is about. I like ...

    Apr 16, 2015


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