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Re: when passions turn to obsessions
Sup, gruffin? I love your poetry about art. I find that I can relate to it a lot. I love the tenderness in this piece, and how hardened it gets ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: impression.
Man, I don't think I have much to say, but I'm going to try to give you a quality review anyhow. I like the repeated sequences, but I'm sticking to ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Release II
Hello! Obviously you like archery, hey? Me too. I thought this was a really nice poem. It captured the beauty of firing an arrow, and I actually think it was ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Tomorrow
Hello! This was a pleasant poem, but in my opinion, it was lacking a lot. First of all, the forced rhyme made this bothersome to read. Not every poem needs ...
May 19, 2015 -
Re: of epitaphs and wilder suns
Remember how I told you I loved this? I still do, but I hate to see it stuck in the green room for so long. Obviously I didn't get to ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Little girl
Hello. This piece was shocking (in a bad way) and I very much did not like it. Your subject matter is obviously something that people don't generally say bluntly like ...
May 5, 2015 -
Re: cold feet + guests
Looks like I'm on a Pompadour binge. XD Is totally not doing this just so she can escape the wrath of bunnies no, no. I really, really, REALLY like this ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Into the Setting Sun Part 2
Hiya! So. You start off with a very specific image of riding off into the setting sun, and then your'e talking about this specific He for the rest of that ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: seanoughts & skyknits
Hello again! Can I just say that I LOVE the title. It makes me really happy. The #2 confuses me. Is there a part one to this? Your first three ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: unlabelled swinging aortas
Hello! I thought this was a really cool poem actually. And the simplicity of it makes me very happy. I think the big words, mostly those in the second stanzas ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Mother Earth
Hello! I think there is a really good point behind this poem. However, I think it is obscured by forced rhyme and thesaurus words. First, let's talk rhyme. Rhyme is ...
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: Kingdom Beyond the Mountains
Hello! I'm partial to these kinds of fantasy poems. They go really well in books, but by themselves, they usually lack a bit. I will review this as if it ...
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: Cuts
Hey. I'm going to say right now that I'm really not a fan of the cutting poems. This poem specifically reminds me of another poem As you can see, they're ...
Apr 16, 2015 -
Re: The Window
Hello! There are a couple things that I think could be adjusted in this poem to make it better. ^^ The message is pretty poignant though. First off, your title ...
Apr 16, 2015 -
Re: Fear
Heyo I like the sentiments behind this poem a lot, and I think that the thing with the vibrant/duller colors really sums up what this poem is about. I like ...
Apr 16, 2015
